Ok... so hi everyone. My name's Arsh, and this is basically my first box art ever. I've been working on this for a week in my spare time, trying some different things, getting feedback, etc... and I'm happy with what's I've completed so far. I do realize that I seem to have made some mistakes, and I am working on updating the box, but for now I am happy and confident to show it off a little bit. I'd appreciate it if you guys could offer me some suggestions or tips so I can better myself in the future.
I'd like to thank El Crazy (link) and IceFox (link) for offering me some help when I posted this as a WIP on the boards. Thanks guys.
I'd also like to give credit to Crayon Man (link) as he put up the PS3 template on the boards.
With that done, I thank you for taking a look at my piece.
#5, yes, the pic he did is wonderfull. But the text can be better. I think he should remove some text because there is too much and make it bigger. There is an annoying thing too, there is no copyright text...
You'd think in this day and age we'd be free of racial tensions... will there always be segregation between black and white boxes!? Multicolour boxes!?
Sir, Martin Luther King had a dream. Now, his dream applied to people, but it could still work for boxes.
:)
In any case, I thought the black would work well due to the nature of the characters. This is a very dark storyline inside the game. The characters are broken and their souls are stained. I coulda gone in another direction... but...
You know, the one odd thing is, when I posted this, the quality seemed to go down a bit from the original... anyone know why?
Ok... so hi everyone. My name's Arsh, and this is basically my first box art ever. I've been working on this for a week in my spare time, trying some different things, getting feedback, etc... and I'm happy with what's I've completed so far. I do realize that I seem to have made some mistakes, and I am working on updating the box, but for now I am happy and confident to show it off a little bit. I'd appreciate it if you guys could offer me some suggestions or tips so I can better myself in the future.
I'd like to thank El Crazy (link) and IceFox (link) for offering me some help when I posted this as a WIP on the boards. Thanks guys.
I'd also like to give credit to Crayon Man (link) as he put up the PS3 template on the boards.
With that done, I thank you for taking a look at my piece.
KANE & LYNCH FOR LIFE!
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Thanks for the nod :)
This is a really nice box. The front is pretty simple but I like it a lot.
The back is OOZING with style.
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Really good, captures the style and essence of Kane and Lynch perfectly.
Only one gripe: there's too much text.
Other than that, you did an excellent job for a newcomer! :)
Looking forward to more of your works.
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The back picture could be worked better.
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#4, How? I think he did an excellent job with the back.
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#5, yes, the pic he did is wonderfull. But the text can be better. I think he should remove some text because there is too much and make it bigger. There is an annoying thing too, there is no copyright text...
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that almost kicks a*s, but i agree with frenchboy, there is too uc text.
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Other than that, it's good. (and on my last post, i meant too much text, not uc text.)
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#8, In future please don't double post and edit your previous comment.
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my bad. i know, i'm an idiot.
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like elc said. stylish. I like it :)
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Thanks for the comments, guys. Soon as I get the time, I'll try to put those suggestions into the next update/version.
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To much black for my taste.
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#13, What are you, some sort of box racist?
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You'd think in this day and age we'd be free of racial tensions... will there always be segregation between black and white boxes!? Multicolour boxes!?
Sir, Martin Luther King had a dream. Now, his dream applied to people, but it could still work for boxes.
:)
In any case, I thought the black would work well due to the nature of the characters. This is a very dark storyline inside the game. The characters are broken and their souls are stained. I coulda gone in another direction... but...
You know, the one odd thing is, when I posted this, the quality seemed to go down a bit from the original... anyone know why?
Edited at 1 decade ago
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#15, You saved it as a .jpg
You need to save it as .png for better quality
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Oh really? Damn... I didn't know that. Thanks for telling me, man.
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