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Yoshi's Story DS box art cover
By avatar GuitarMan 28 on December 7th, 2007
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kirby22 14 [ 1 decade ago ]

yo this is pretty good. but there's no esrb on back. 4/5.

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vidboy10 34 [ 1 decade ago ]

and no game description on the back!

Edited at 1 decade ago

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VGMaster 42 [ 1 decade ago ]

Not bad...

Pros:
-Green yoshi's are well cut out.
-Pink Yoshi's well cut out
-YYoshi Story part of the logo looks good.
-bg on front is good.

Problems:
-The 'DS' logo
-The Red yoshi. Not very well cut or placed.
-Location of pink yoshi
-The bg on the back is too bright
-Screenshot borders would look better.
-No text on the back
-No ESRB on the back
-dev and esrb logos too small.

I know the problems list is big, but it's mostly a lot of littler errors.

Just fix some of that up (not telling you you have to, but offering a suggestion) abd it'll be a fave from me.

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Infamous Stick 17 [ 1 decade ago ]

#3, I agree. But I think he should just get rid of the red Yoshi and replace one green Yoshi with the pink one.

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GuitarMan 28 [ 1 decade ago ]

I know all of this i uploaded when my friends came and wasn't thinking straight i'm uploading the updated version.

Edit- Can someone cut out a beter DS thing that's the best i can get mine

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ravenrooney 32 [ 1 decade ago ]

Add a logo on the spine...put borders around the pictures on the back..somehow make the text more readable on the back side...and remove the red Yoshi on the front cover....

And you will have a good looking box art.

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GuitarMan 28 [ 1 decade ago ]

yeah but it's missing something to go in the middle i just don't know what.

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GuitarMan 28 [ 1 decade ago ]

updated
this looks a lot better

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VGMaster 42 [ 1 decade ago ]

The front= worlds better!

Only suggestions - move pinky and cut more white off DS logo

The back - still needs some:

Make bg daarker. Screenshot borders.

Then it would look really good!

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GuitarMan 28 [ 1 decade ago ]

#9, on the DS i tried to remove all the white bul that's as good as i got. i'm gunna gat a new bg for the back and i have no clue how to make boarders for screen shots.

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TwistedTinkerToy 43 [ 1 decade ago ]

LATE COMMENT: It looks better but:

The screenshots are allover the place.
No borders for the screenshots.
Bad choice of image for the back.
You should get rid of the two pink Yoshis.
It says "Carton violence" and it should be "Cartoon violence".

3/5

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Skppy 1 [ 1 decade ago ]

i like it better now. it's not to little, and it's not too much. not your best box but it's okay. 4/5

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yoshi123 1 [ 1 decade ago ]

#10, i just want to know how much it cost, where can i find it, and if i can download it because i'm yoshi's #1 fan!! i've been looking for yoshi's story for DS forever now. Now that i found it i'm soooooooooo excited!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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