To be honest... i dont like the pictures!! I agree with #3
And maybe you should give credit to WHO created those pictures!! Not just where you got from! Because I doubt the good people at Google spent hours drawing those =/
#4, if he got them from google, drawn or not, you don't have to say who made it. If your whole box is just a drawing, a title and a template, then people will say that, MAYBE, but no, he doesn't have to credit it. btw, the box front is hmm... ok, but the back is kind bad, the text is very hard to read, and the characters don't fit in at all. I guess thats also true with the front. so yeah, its ok though, no major design flaws, oh wait... you need a developer logo. yeah. 2.9/5 (that last point was for the dev logo :P)
I UPDATED THE BOX, i added a ring behind sonic on the front, i changed the layout on the back and added sum screenshots, ima explain the screenshots...the top left screen is sonic being transformed into chaos sonic(the one on the cover), the top right screen is shadow using chaos blast(a special move) and the bottom screen is them being captured
here is an idea i got when i saw the character images, credit to techne for the template and google for the images
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wow its really good i like how you made all the sonic charecters look differebt and cool.4.5/5
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omg what happened to sonic? did he just get raped by some deranged psychotic fanboy?
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To be honest... i dont like the pictures!! I agree with #3
And maybe you should give credit to WHO created those pictures!! Not just where you got from! Because I doubt the good people at Google spent hours drawing those =/
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#4, if he got them from google, drawn or not, you don't have to say who made it. If your whole box is just a drawing, a title and a template, then people will say that, MAYBE, but no, he doesn't have to credit it. btw, the box front is hmm... ok, but the back is kind bad, the text is very hard to read, and the characters don't fit in at all. I guess thats also true with the front. so yeah, its ok though, no major design flaws, oh wait... you need a developer logo. yeah. 2.9/5 (that last point was for the dev logo :P)
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Also another thing, the back description is badly written
"When Dr. Eggman caught Sonic and his friends"
Hmm maybe its just me but that doesn't sound right! Try replacing "caught" with captured?
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#6, ok ill do that, and #5 i forgot about the dev logos, ill do that to
EDIT: ima change the layout of the back also
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#7 Yeah go for it :D
Have some screenshots instead of the characters too!
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#8, its kinda hard to find some screen shots
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#9 Make them yourself?
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#10, iight ima try
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#11 Yeah they dont have to be perfect screen shots! But adding them would just give the box more of an authenic feel and make it look more official!
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I UPDATED THE BOX, i added a ring behind sonic on the front, i changed the layout on the back and added sum screenshots, ima explain the screenshots...the top left screen is sonic being transformed into chaos sonic(the one on the cover), the top right screen is shadow using chaos blast(a special move) and the bottom screen is them being captured
EDIT: and i added the dev logos
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I remember someone else using these sonic images a year or so ago, you need to give credit. as for the box, its decent.
Demon Sonic:
link
Demon Shadow:
link
Demon Knuckles:
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#14, well i didnt know they were from there, srry
credit to Kiguri from deviantart
i found the renders on google though but i see that these are the originals so credit to Kiguri
and let me get a rating
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The back is better but the text is still hard to read sorta! =/
And im still not keen on those Knuckles and Shadow images on the back
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#16, i saw some more images on that deviantart site, but they were of espio and rose, people like that, so i picked the more famous characters
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#1, 3/5
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#18, constructive critisism is the rule man, say why you give me a 3/5
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i dunno
i got bored and wanted to comment on a random box.
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#20, lol ok wut ever
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yea, i just realized this, the title above of the box goes as " Viewing Box » Unofficial » Sonic The Hedgehog Project: CHOAS (360)" choas, chaos
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#22, shizzle, we got sherlock homes in the house, how about a comment on the box bro?
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#23, okay, the box is good, nice pics, good updated version, i'd give it a 10
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#24, wow thanks, it was fun to make
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thats a great idea! i love how you made them look so evil!
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#26, he didn't make them
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#27, i never said i did
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omg i saw that sonic art on google a while back...
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#29, its somewhere on devainart
Kiguri from deviantart
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