Darn yummybrains.xD
well, behold.. my latest submission, and more importantly, my second one after a huge internet loss..[a month..right?]
because of these internet problems, i've dropped from 3rd to 10th place in most fav'd artist rank.[what if? ;)]
Credit is in image.
-edit- i know, but with this art, to make it more dark, and fantasy-like, i needed to do that.
Looks good.. I like how it's so colourful... even like the contrast makes it different. ;) Like the way the characters, slope to one side too. Not too keen on the screenshots/text on back... seems like a bit squeezed into the corner.. or the glow on the specs.. however, job well done.
This is a very impressive boxart ayron - I think there are just some problems but if you fix them then its easily one of the best you've made.
- firstly fix the "P3" part the right way up. Change the yellow outer glow to the light blue as you have on the tagline behind.
- Place the second screenshot slightly away towards the right, and at the same level as the first (not higher or lower). Give it a slight blue outer glow.
- Decrease the amount of text on under the first screenshot.
- Nudge the tagline a bit more towards the left.
- Remove the outer glow from the legal info and dolby/DVD logos - it looks weird. Fix the size of the Dolby logos (when re-sizing remember to click the "paperclip" so both height and width are auto-adjusted and drag from corner) and just make them white without any glow. Even the text. It should look much better.
#12, thanks for the criticism dms.
Luckily enough, i already had 4/5 things you've stated updated as i read your comment.
Here it is, the updated version ^^
I love it!
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this is really cool. the contrast is too high though. y'know, you don't always have to turn it up... it kinda kills the box in my opinion
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Darn yummybrains.xD
well, behold.. my latest submission, and more importantly, my second one after a huge internet loss..[a month..right?]
because of these internet problems, i've dropped from 3rd to 10th place in most fav'd artist rank.[what if? ;)]
Credit is in image.
-edit- i know, but with this art, to make it more dark, and fantasy-like, i needed to do that.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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I like it. I was going to do a box of this game but i changed my mind :)
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#4, thank you ^^'
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#3, Indeed
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Nice it looks a lot better without the high contrast good job :D
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Looks good.. I like how it's so colourful... even like the contrast makes it different. ;) Like the way the characters, slope to one side too. Not too keen on the screenshots/text on back... seems like a bit squeezed into the corner.. or the glow on the specs.. however, job well done.
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#8, Thanks a bunch. means alot ;).
Any tips on the back?
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quite nice.. maybe you should use some more time with the title logo.
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#10, more ..time?. sorry, but i don't quite get it.
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This is a very impressive boxart ayron - I think there are just some problems but if you fix them then its easily one of the best you've made.
- firstly fix the "P3" part the right way up. Change the yellow outer glow to the light blue as you have on the tagline behind.
- Place the second screenshot slightly away towards the right, and at the same level as the first (not higher or lower). Give it a slight blue outer glow.
- Decrease the amount of text on under the first screenshot.
- Nudge the tagline a bit more towards the left.
- Remove the outer glow from the legal info and dolby/DVD logos - it looks weird. Fix the size of the Dolby logos (when re-sizing remember to click the "paperclip" so both height and width are auto-adjusted and drag from corner) and just make them white without any glow. Even the text. It should look much better.
Best of luck! :)
Edited at 1 decade ago
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#12, thanks for the criticism dms.
Luckily enough, i already had 4/5 things you've stated updated as i read your comment.
Here it is, the updated version ^^
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Nice one Ayron.. I was gonna suggest similar to DMS but looks like you've done it ;)
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#14, thanks,Marker ^^'
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Ohh lovely.
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+FAV. ;)
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#11, ehm, okay i know my english is bad.. but you have fixed the logo, much better now..
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impressive.
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So cool!
Just hoping there won't be a flood of P3 boxes*
Since I'm also planning to make one...finally XD
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thanks everyone.^^'.
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Simply amazing. A magnificent piece of work.
However, I feel you should widen your font use.
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#22, i've never even used it before??.. i'll try and see what i can do though =]
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#23, Isn't it the font that I said that it was Times New Roman but it turns out it was some Adobe font?
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#24, Nope, not really. it's a spin-off off a game font,i believe.
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it might be a different font, but it still looks the same... try something different. even if it's not the same name, it's pretty much the same style.
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#26, please read #19.
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Well, It isn't so good... sorry... =D
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'Tis pwnage, but I suggest you make the screenshots bigger or draw more attention to them somehow. Still, fav'd.
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#29, i know, but it'd be too busy that way[see v2.]
lol @#28 ;)
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looks great ^_^
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nicely done faved
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I'm giving you a thumbs up. Ayron, you rock my soxz. 5/5 +fav
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Awesome ^^'.
my 10th Hall ;)
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