As i was looking through the archives, trying to find a box to make...
i saw that one game in particular hadn't had one 'WOW!'-effect box posted here.
Well, as you know me, i always try to be original.. and this is no exception.
Also, i wanted to know how ADFD felt whilst making the winterfest box
[ which i'm probably losing from ;)... i hope i finish my box soon.xD ].
I almost made everything by myself.. >.<'
Credit to: - MARKER for logo
- ADFD for template [ i left your esrb, i kinda liked it ;).. plus, it's auto-credit...smart =D]
Comments/criticism is highly appreciated.
Please people, don't let this rust away like my two previous boxes. ;)
better than the offisial one, but why is there enemys in delfino plaza?
Edit: And it dont stand how many players and how many blocks it tames...
and I dont like the sleeping mario on the front.
I'll be honest, I love the front, but I find the back isn't so good. The screens ar great, nothing to say about it, but what I find the most distracting is the text. I think it should be bigger. Plus, I don't think that font fit the game. it should be more "cartoonish". And the tagline is kinda randomly placed. I love the front and the screens work though.
I really like it but I have criticisms, I think the huge background behind the box is too much of a distraction. A more upbeat font for the back description could be nice and the tag line suits more of a rhythm game if you ask me. I'll fav it though because I love what you did with the effects.
As i was looking through the archives, trying to find a box to make...
i saw that one game in particular hadn't had one 'WOW!'-effect box posted here.
Well, as you know me, i always try to be original.. and this is no exception.
Also, i wanted to know how ADFD felt whilst making the winterfest box
[ which i'm probably losing from ;)... i hope i finish my box soon.xD ].
I almost made everything by myself.. >.<'
Credit to: - MARKER for logo
- ADFD for template [ i left your esrb, i kinda liked it ;).. plus, it's auto-credit...smart =D]
Comments/criticism is highly appreciated.
Please people, don't let this rust away like my two previous boxes. ;)
Thanks in progress,
-Ayron
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I really like the front. Very original. however the back just seems kind of off to me. I cant really place it though.
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#2, hmm.. odd..
well, i know something, i'll see if anyone else feels the same, and update later on..ok?
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The front is amazing, but the back is kinda plain.
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all i see is an error image
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i've updated with a subtle pattern on the back. hope that breaks it down for you.
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#6, is still can see it =[
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better than the offisial one, but why is there enemys in delfino plaza?
Edit: And it dont stand how many players and how many blocks it tames...
and I dont like the sleeping mario on the front.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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wow this is grea! 4/5 better than the official!
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#8, your opinion ;).
Thanks everyone,btw.
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Yup, Good Mario Sunshine boxes are hard to make. And this is definately a good one.
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#11, indeed.
But, give 'shining force exa' a shot ;)
-sigh-
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wow it looks so good but why supper mario sunshine i must ask?
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it's nice. it's very colorful and bright. you shoulda used the real esrb, but i really like it. 4.5/5
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#13, i have no clue...
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Looks great but the background is a little on the big side.
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Tagline on the back bothers me, but other than the huge background like #16 said, this is fantastic! :)
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nice, fav
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it is pretty making. i like it.
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Yeah, the back is kinda plain. But the front is enough to win me over.
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I'll be honest, I love the front, but I find the back isn't so good. The screens ar great, nothing to say about it, but what I find the most distracting is the text. I think it should be bigger. Plus, I don't think that font fit the game. it should be more "cartoonish". And the tagline is kinda randomly placed. I love the front and the screens work though.
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I really like it but I have criticisms, I think the huge background behind the box is too much of a distraction. A more upbeat font for the back description could be nice and the tag line suits more of a rhythm game if you ask me. I'll fav it though because I love what you did with the effects.
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The front is perty much win, but I don't like how you used that *cough* font on the back.
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I think like everyone said, the front cover is fantastic. The back mainly needs work in the font department.
Also, I think if you remove the BG behind the box it would really help too, as EG said. Go for a simple BG (gradient)
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Well done on the HoF. It was my temp that did it huh? XP
Edited at 1 decade ago
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thanks,everyone.
expect a HOF-update tonight ;)
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Now you got more HoFs than me :(
LOL congrats on the HoF, mate! Box looks superb!
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Ayron, you got HoF in 2 DAYS! OMGZORZ YOU ARE THA B0MB! Nice box, faved
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#28, well, not really. i'm no MARKER, Alldreamsfalldown,dmshaposv, elcrazy or thecodemaster.. just to name a few. But i get along quite nicely.
#27, so unfair. you're way better,dude ;)
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Wow this is great, congratulations for the HoF.
(+ fav)
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AWSOME!!!!!!
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NICE IDEA !!!!!+FAV
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Great! 5/5 +fav +fav author
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