Very nice, I think its very good for a first. Usually there is about 3 screen shots for a box but it doesn't really matter. It helps take up space. I think the target on the logo is cool but I would take it off the box corners so its not overused. I would move the EA logo up as high as the ESRB and maybe add a background if you want to update. The background is cool but I would incorporate the theme of the front to the back as well. Good job for a first and I have a feeling your going to be a great artist.
The shot of Bart on the back is a little blurry, and usually on the ESRBs they would put "Mild Language" instead of "Bad Language." other than that it looks great!
My First Box! What do you think. :)
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Woah, Very impressive. Im too lazt to look, but first? This deserves a fav...
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woah your first that's amazing. i'll fav it.
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nice. defenetely deserves a fave.
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#2,#3,#4 - Thanks for your comments :D
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Very nice, I think its very good for a first. Usually there is about 3 screen shots for a box but it doesn't really matter. It helps take up space. I think the target on the logo is cool but I would take it off the box corners so its not overused. I would move the EA logo up as high as the ESRB and maybe add a background if you want to update. The background is cool but I would incorporate the theme of the front to the back as well. Good job for a first and I have a feeling your going to be a great artist.
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yes.
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looks nice, but there are some grammar errors on the back
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#8, Yeah, sorry about that
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Edited at 1 decade ago
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If you have AIM you can always send your WIP to other VGBA members and they will help you out.
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#11, Yeah, I'll put it on soon. Thanks.
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Love the front. I would suggest one more screenshot on the back, and another character, maybe.
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Agreed with trev and ttt. Very nice for a first and keep up the good work. ;)
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Impressive.
Fabulous.
I love it.
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fav
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The shot of Bart on the back is a little blurry, and usually on the ESRBs they would put "Mild Language" instead of "Bad Language." other than that it looks great!
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