For a first box, I'm definitely impressed- this also brings a lot of nostalgia for me since it was also my debut box. (I got a lot of positive comments on it, though I did get some harsh crits too and that has inspired me in the long run...I won't go there any further though lol)
That said, having more experience now, I can definitely suggest a lot to improve this box.
- Opt for having a slightly larger kh2 logo
- Front squeanix logo might as well been white
- Character renders on the back seem quite random and aren't in the best quality
- Work on the perfect staggering of the tagline
- Lots of back game info errors (small esrb with a large stroke etc)
Mainly errors in technique for the most part, which I feel needs to be hammered down as early as possible. Looking forward to more boxes from you. ;)
The back text where it says "The story is not over!", "The" should be aligned with the rest and the over should be all the way left, under story or all the way right i think. Looks great. The ESRB and bar code could be bigger. The back could use more but its your first and its good for a first.
#25, Aw common im not that bad;].Anyway about the box. Great, i mean really great for a first but its not SPECTACULAR but i believe it deserves a fav. Cant wait to see your next boxes^^
#10, i agree. this is a great first but it's really not wowing me. get rid of Kairi and Riku on the back... they look out of place and aren't really needed. Put Donald, Goofy and/or Mickey instead. And the bottom part of the back is pretty empty, the DVD logo looks kind of lonely. But for a first it's really awesome.
Looks good.. nice design and well put together.
Have to agree with LK on a lot of issues.. especially the right alignment of the text not being absolutely straight... you guys know I'm a stickler for ragged text! lol -- and I don't blame you for the black Square Enix logo.. stupid Brandsoftheworld don't have the white version ;) Nice 1st box... hope to see more!
Agreed with ladykiller.
i must honestly say that you've won my respect. First box,and i already feel humiliated. -throws away 6 rank-dots- ;)
For effort,epic concept and originality- i hereby reward you with +fav Box and Author.
well, i like it, but you kinda forgot to credit me for my screen borders, or did you make them from material on the kh2 site?
very nice for a first, but if those are my screenie borders, can you please credit me, if they are not, you dont have to
HOLY MOTHER OF GOD, YOU ARE WINNER.
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YOU ARE GOD! *prays*
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My 1st box , hope everyone enjoys thanks
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O_o
This is the best first I've ever seen.
Ever.
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You just pwned every other Kingdom Hearts box on the site. Just fix the ESRB on the back.
Ladies and gentlemen, we have ourselves a new Ladykiller.
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#5, That's exactly what I was thinking.
He reminds me a whole fucking lot of solidboss, too.
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#6, ...Maybe they had a kid? :P
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#7, ...maybe, it's Ladykiller's alt. o_____________<
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HOLY FUCK I HAVENT SEEN A DABUT LIKE THIS SINCE COLDPLAY MADE HIS GEARS BOX!
o_O
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Really guys? It looks nice for a first box, it looks good, but it's not great. Maybe it's just me.
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I'm not even a KH fan but this box really caught my eye!
Nice going man! I agree with #5, new Ladykiller yay ^_^
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#6, The boss? psshhh...not even close.
For a first box, I'm definitely impressed- this also brings a lot of nostalgia for me since it was also my debut box. (I got a lot of positive comments on it, though I did get some harsh crits too and that has inspired me in the long run...I won't go there any further though lol)
That said, having more experience now, I can definitely suggest a lot to improve this box.
- Opt for having a slightly larger kh2 logo
- Front squeanix logo might as well been white
- Character renders on the back seem quite random and aren't in the best quality
- Work on the perfect staggering of the tagline
- Lots of back game info errors (small esrb with a large stroke etc)
Mainly errors in technique for the most part, which I feel needs to be hammered down as early as possible. Looking forward to more boxes from you. ;)
P.S. I know where you got those textures. ^^
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#12, Which reminds me, where is that little man? You need to strap him down and have him make a new box nao.
Also get on AIM.
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#12, Where? WHERE?!?!?!
Also, what's Squeanix? ^^
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#12, Well uh umm yeah what you said. Still, its a first, deffinately a fav.
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#14, DA...haha
Square Enix...
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#16, Great, now he's gonna be asking what a DA is. xD
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My god.
My god.
My god.
My god.
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OMG
this is amazing
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#19, No shit.
HoF nao.
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I hereby decree:
He who does not fave this box is a moron.
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#21, Amen.
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#21, Amen.
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Wow. This is really good =O
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Finally, a new member that ISN'T horrible.
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Yes.
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The back text where it says "The story is not over!", "The" should be aligned with the rest and the over should be all the way left, under story or all the way right i think. Looks great. The ESRB and bar code could be bigger. The back could use more but its your first and its good for a first.
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#25, Aw common im not that bad;].Anyway about the box. Great, i mean really great for a first but its not SPECTACULAR but i believe it deserves a fav. Cant wait to see your next boxes^^
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#10, i agree. this is a great first but it's really not wowing me. get rid of Kairi and Riku on the back... they look out of place and aren't really needed. Put Donald, Goofy and/or Mickey instead. And the bottom part of the back is pretty empty, the DVD logo looks kind of lonely. But for a first it's really awesome.
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OMG! Your first! Thats freakin awesome, I see another upcoming brilliant artist. Can't wait to see what you have coming up...
P.S. Your a rank 3 and youve only made one box, that's damn good.
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Rank 3 after one box, with the new artists weve been getting lately......I am amazed.
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Wow thanks guys ill keep in mind everything you said:D
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Wow, this is good.
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great first box. welcome to the site.
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Awesome First box dude.
Welcome to the site!
P.S-Come on! This has 98 points!Just 2 more points till the hall!
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First box HOF!!!
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Wow thanks everyone I can't believe i got HoF. This is the beginning of many. :D
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Called it!
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Congrats for the HALL OF FAME!
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Simplicity at it's best.
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btw, am I the only one who noticed that the SE logo on the front looks absolutely terrible...?
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Looks good.. nice design and well put together.
Have to agree with LK on a lot of issues.. especially the right alignment of the text not being absolutely straight... you guys know I'm a stickler for ragged text! lol -- and I don't blame you for the black Square Enix logo.. stupid Brandsoftheworld don't have the white version ;) Nice 1st box... hope to see more!
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Agreed with ladykiller.
i must honestly say that you've won my respect. First box,and i already feel humiliated. -throws away 6 rank-dots- ;)
For effort,epic concept and originality- i hereby reward you with +fav Box and Author.
Good luck!
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Yippy!! X)
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Ouch! You melted my eyeballs....
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pretty good, for your first, the renders on the back are a bit low res, but the overall product here is nice.
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I'm gonna be really smug when, by the end of the year, you have a kojillion author faves.
And I was the first one.
*jig*
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Damn, you're good.
But your KH logo has a jap title under it.
Still good though.
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I'm not surprised.
This some legit work, for a first post. (even if this isn't your first box, could have practiced.)
I'm expecting some great work from the new guy.
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well, i like it, but you kinda forgot to credit me for my screen borders, or did you make them from material on the kh2 site?
very nice for a first, but if those are my screenie borders, can you please credit me, if they are not, you dont have to
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made by me and KH materials
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Nice!
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