I'm very disappointed by the comments here. There are hardly anything helpful and just mainly fan praises.
COVER
-Even though it looks nice, company logos almost never change colors to go along with the game cover.
-I've barely ever seen any Dragonball Game ever change the color of their logo to go with the game cover also.
-Change the Transformation logo to match with the anime logo. You also need to make it bigger. I never even noticed the "Transformation" words until I toke a closer look.
-The top is pretty empty. That's either a good or bad thing.
BACK
-You REALLY need to read your back cover out loud as you will notice alot of errors.
-First off, the starting line is very weird. You need to change thing.
-The 2nd line feels like your leading into another line. Also the "B" in Brand is captized, when it shouldn't be. I recommend moving this line first, then putting the GT line after.
-You mentioned playing with seven friends, yet the number of players on the lower left hand cover says it's only up to 1-7. Do you really mean seven friends can play, but that's not including you?
-Everything in the " are captized, yet "Create your own fighter" isn't.
-You mispelled "Desgin", and there's no period after Arena.
-The "i" in "It'll" shouldn't be captized.
-Now this is a fan comment. You have the wrong Gohan on the cover for the saga your trying to cover (along with the shot from BT3/BT2, which doesn't take place in the GT saga). You used an anime image of the starting villain, so there's no excuse why you couldn't do that too other than there's no video game version of the right Gohan.
-Also, why is Metal Frezia there too? That is way in the start of the Androids saga, way after GT. And by the time GT came, Frezia was normal.
-As mufh as a WWE fan I am, I am REALLY disappointed that you're using Stone Cold's catchphase. If this was offical, would you really think they should allow you to steal that line? You even made the font the same. Also, I don't think "Raise Hell" would be on a box cover that says the game is for 7+.
-You REALLY need to read the bottom copyrights. There is no mention of the lincese, and there's a line that mentions how you need parents concent if your under 18. Again, 7+?
Great. Sorry for the spelling error, but come on. Just because it looks great, it means that this person isn't allowed to get some real comments on the box? You don't want the person to fix their errors? Or just want to praise them?
You didn't even read the whole thing if you think my whole comment is based on which character is from which series. You don't think this person should fix the grammar errors? You don't want this great box art to look even better? Do you really have that much of a problem to HELP this person than to just say "cool!"? Praising doesn't help as much as real helpful info.
And if you still only care about my comment on Frezia, I'm sorry. I made a spelling error. It happened way before GT. So, is that it now? Are you saying that because I made an error, there is no problems at all? I'll recopy everything I said and fix the error then, if you want me to.
Read the comment text before you comment. Here it is again:
Comments are meant to provide the author with feedback on their work. Constructive criticism is the rule!
I am really sorry for deleting again :(
I promise you this is the last time, Well anyways-----This is my grungy DBZ box.
Remember Grunge was my goal, So please keep that In mind.
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Oh yes, and Make sure to vote at : link
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Yes, this box makes perfect sense. A DBGT game with renders of DBZ characters.
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#3, Uhum, Theres only one DBZ Char the other one is a movie char -_-
You sicken me.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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How many times have you deleted this? Why?
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#5, This time it was because I was told to wait until the end of the duel, But I said forget it, So yes. I'm sorry.
Anywho----What do you think of the box?
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Yes, this box is good DBZ and DBGT !
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Thats nice.. big gold touch to it..
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#4, that movie character is Gohan....DBZ....History of Trunks movie
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#7, Yes.
#8, ThankU
#9, I never said It wasn't ;)
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amazing, and the back,whoa!
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#11, Yeh, Thanks.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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-_- Like I said the last time. Awesome box. xP
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Well, Thanks again ;)
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lol did you get the tagline from stone cold steve austin?
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#15, Yes :)
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#4 metal freza and ssj3 gotenks are dbz
you sicken me
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#17, that isn't SSJ3 Gotenks. That's SSJ3 Kid Goku from GT.
YOU sicken me. xD
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#18 oh it is to
I sicken me
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GEEKS haha
good box i dont get the whole what characters are from where thing but ok
just maybe to gold but its nice
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I'm very disappointed by the comments here. There are hardly anything helpful and just mainly fan praises.
COVER
-Even though it looks nice, company logos almost never change colors to go along with the game cover.
-I've barely ever seen any Dragonball Game ever change the color of their logo to go with the game cover also.
-Change the Transformation logo to match with the anime logo. You also need to make it bigger. I never even noticed the "Transformation" words until I toke a closer look.
-The top is pretty empty. That's either a good or bad thing.
BACK
-You REALLY need to read your back cover out loud as you will notice alot of errors.
-First off, the starting line is very weird. You need to change thing.
-The 2nd line feels like your leading into another line. Also the "B" in Brand is captized, when it shouldn't be. I recommend moving this line first, then putting the GT line after.
-You mentioned playing with seven friends, yet the number of players on the lower left hand cover says it's only up to 1-7. Do you really mean seven friends can play, but that's not including you?
-Everything in the " are captized, yet "Create your own fighter" isn't.
-You mispelled "Desgin", and there's no period after Arena.
-The "i" in "It'll" shouldn't be captized.
-Now this is a fan comment. You have the wrong Gohan on the cover for the saga your trying to cover (along with the shot from BT3/BT2, which doesn't take place in the GT saga). You used an anime image of the starting villain, so there's no excuse why you couldn't do that too other than there's no video game version of the right Gohan.
-Also, why is Metal Frezia there too? That is way in the start of the Androids saga, way after GT. And by the time GT came, Frezia was normal.
-As mufh as a WWE fan I am, I am REALLY disappointed that you're using Stone Cold's catchphase. If this was offical, would you really think they should allow you to steal that line? You even made the font the same. Also, I don't think "Raise Hell" would be on a box cover that says the game is for 7+.
-You REALLY need to read the bottom copyrights. There is no mention of the lincese, and there's a line that mentions how you need parents concent if your under 18. Again, 7+?
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-Also, why is Metal Frezia there too? That is way in the start of the Androids saga, way after GT. And by the time GT came, Frezia was normal.
You disgust me.
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#22, are you saing that the androids saga was after gt? if so, you disgust me xP xD
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You all disgust me XD
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#24, i just went on wiki to look smart xD
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Why does it matter?
The box looks good, stop nit-picking at what series each character is from, you ingrates.
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#23, That's a quote from the comment above mine.
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Great. Sorry for the spelling error, but come on. Just because it looks great, it means that this person isn't allowed to get some real comments on the box? You don't want the person to fix their errors? Or just want to praise them?
You didn't even read the whole thing if you think my whole comment is based on which character is from which series. You don't think this person should fix the grammar errors? You don't want this great box art to look even better? Do you really have that much of a problem to HELP this person than to just say "cool!"? Praising doesn't help as much as real helpful info.
And if you still only care about my comment on Frezia, I'm sorry. I made a spelling error. It happened way before GT. So, is that it now? Are you saying that because I made an error, there is no problems at all? I'll recopy everything I said and fix the error then, if you want me to.
Read the comment text before you comment. Here it is again:
Comments are meant to provide the author with feedback on their work. Constructive criticism is the rule!
Edited at 1 decade ago
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you all make me sick
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you all make me sick
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great box :P
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great box 4/5
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