well, to be honest, for a first box...it's really not that bad. it's just needs an esrb and a company logo. but yeah, compared to most first boxes, this isn't too bad. :)
I agree. For a first box, this is a valiant effort. I feel that the characters blend into each other too much. It feels like a collage,which isn't bad in and of itself, but it doesn't work against a background as visually complex as that starfield.
I think you're on the right track though. I'll be interested to see what you come up with next!
You were thinking well, but its a bit too crowded... everythings cut out, but things are just blended at random, but its not too bad. Try taking advice from the top two comments and come up with a Version 2
nice ideas but badly made
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well, to be honest, for a first box...it's really not that bad. it's just needs an esrb and a company logo. but yeah, compared to most first boxes, this isn't too bad. :)
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I agree. For a first box, this is a valiant effort. I feel that the characters blend into each other too much. It feels like a collage,which isn't bad in and of itself, but it doesn't work against a background as visually complex as that starfield.
I think you're on the right track though. I'll be interested to see what you come up with next!
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You were thinking well, but its a bit too crowded... everythings cut out, but things are just blended at random, but its not too bad. Try taking advice from the top two comments and come up with a Version 2
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Good first, too tell the truth, I wouldn't of worked this hard on my first box XD nice effort! :D
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