Full view is huge! Kreds to Numero Betically for the Temp, Sorry, no homemade material this time, well, if the back ESRB counts, then yeah...
Enjoy! No doubt this is one of my best!
This is nice. But I don't like the screenshot borders on the back. :/
Also I'd of made Sonic and his alternate self hand out of the circle at the top of they're head, and their feet be cut off by the circle. If you think about it, Sonic runs headfirst, so it'd be hard for his feet to be in front of his head when running.
Well,Its a Decent box. My only problem is the back.
The Tagline,"Unleash the beast",Looks like it is saying "Unleash beast the".The screenshots are Choppy,And I don't like the outline of the Sonic's. Also,The naruto In the middle Is ticking me off,It just looks plain Idiotic right there -.-'
Box is pretty good, but i think you should stop making Sonic boxes, try something different, like a FPS or an RPG game (not including Sonic Chronicles)
I have NO idea when people say that, "Not that Naruto Guy..." Umm, YOU JUST SAID HIS FREAKING NAME! I did that to prevent people from stealing, and no, i ain't removing it
#7 This is exactly why people don't want to favorite your box. You constantly submit boxarts, which are mainly Sonic and mediocre, have a snappy attitude, and constantly promote the show "Naruto". let's face it, most people on this site dislike that show, and call those obsessed with it "Narutards". Also, when you were HtH, you constantly mentioned, Police, defacing monuments in your town and the like. Either your really ARE obsessed with characters from that show, or you need to correct your attitude. Personally, I think it's both.
If you decide to reply (in regard to the boxarts) with "No one isn't giving me advice" I suggest you correct your attitude first. I'm sorry if I'm being too harsh, but I need to say the truth.
#8, i don't promote Naruto, I'm just posting him there, it's not any different than Koopa posting his Koopa on his boxes, I'm doing the same, so screw off, I don't deface monuments, I had 3 simple problems that involved the police, I'm obsessed, but not enough to talk about him all the time. Also, you can't tell me to change my attitude, thats like telling a weak person to start working out. They never do it. It's my choice, so leave me alone.
#9, That is the kind of additude Jbone Is talking about. He give's you advice,And you tell him to screw off.Very mature of you Rasengan_boi. Very mature.
And,If you Dont change that little additude of yours,It's gonna lead to you Being banned.
#10, people tend to tell other users that they're not trying to be harsh, but they;re still trying to inflict some damage to the other user, Jbones had a knack for doing that to me
The screen boarders on the back are a little weird, but I like the circular city thing on the front. I would reccomend taking that purple character from the top right on the front out though, he's kind of just "there".
Also, Naruto is distracting, but I understand you want to keep him there.
Try and establish a character montage the viewers will understand! because right now i dont understand whats going on on your box! Yes i understand there is a world like theme going on but you should try and develop that idea and edit that purple circle making it into an earth or something :P ( i think that was the look you was going for) The two characters at the top right and left hand corner are badly placed, These are things you must take more notice of while making boxes. The character placement. I would also suggest taking the glow of the characters as it doset look to good or at least make them softer. Try organinising the back of the box in a way it will fill up more space and lower the opacity of the blur on the logo! other than that you've got an okay box :) long comment lol
#14, In my opinion, there's a difference between Koopa's Koopa and your Naruto. I personally like reading Naruto, it's a weekly habit to read the new manga ASAP when it's released, but even I don't like it's placement. If someone wanted to steal this, it would be simple work in Photoshop to delete/edit what you have added to your box. I don't think Jbone was trying to give you a hard time, he was trying to help you with your presentation. I say keep Naruto in your presentation if you like, but do it off to a corner so that it's not so distracting. Incorporate a watermark into your design. There's a lot of ways to make sure people don't steal your stuff. As for your attitude you have at times, I tried saying the same to you, but you blew me off, too. You just didn't tell me to screw off. My other peeve with your personality is that people here begin to want to tell you what they think would improve your boxes and through that, your Rank, and you disregard them. I've never really seen you make an effort to make a box you've made better.
Take my advice (once more) or leave it, I don't care. I'm not being hurtful, but acting the way you do won't get you very far as an artist.
#17 I never said the words "Not being harsh", read my post: "I'm sorry If I'm being too harsh". I also never said "I hate Naruto". I said most of the site dislikes it, so you can't judge (from that post) whether I do, or do not like it. I read the manga every once in a while, but I am not obsessed with it.
If you decide to quote me, at least do so properly.
Now, because I feel like I'm doing the wrong thing by not even commenting on the box, here's my critique. Cut out the Sonics better, put the exploding Earth instead of that purple thing, and just remove the back completely.
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Full view is huge! Kreds to Numero Betically for the Temp, Sorry, no homemade material this time, well, if the back ESRB counts, then yeah...
Enjoy! No doubt this is one of my best!
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This is nice. But I don't like the screenshot borders on the back. :/
Also I'd of made Sonic and his alternate self hand out of the circle at the top of they're head, and their feet be cut off by the circle. If you think about it, Sonic runs headfirst, so it'd be hard for his feet to be in front of his head when running.
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Well,Its a Decent box. My only problem is the back.
The Tagline,"Unleash the beast",Looks like it is saying "Unleash beast the".The screenshots are Choppy,And I don't like the outline of the Sonic's. Also,The naruto In the middle Is ticking me off,It just looks plain Idiotic right there -.-'
But overall,Its a 4/5 In my opinion.
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Your best box so far...the back is a little lacking, but this definetly deserves a fav.
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NOO!! not that naruto again :(
Box is pretty good, but i think you should stop making Sonic boxes, try something different, like a FPS or an RPG game (not including Sonic Chronicles)
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And so... the Naruto guy returns...
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I have NO idea when people say that, "Not that Naruto Guy..." Umm, YOU JUST SAID HIS FREAKING NAME! I did that to prevent people from stealing, and no, i ain't removing it
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#7 This is exactly why people don't want to favorite your box. You constantly submit boxarts, which are mainly Sonic and mediocre, have a snappy attitude, and constantly promote the show "Naruto". let's face it, most people on this site dislike that show, and call those obsessed with it "Narutards". Also, when you were HtH, you constantly mentioned, Police, defacing monuments in your town and the like. Either your really ARE obsessed with characters from that show, or you need to correct your attitude. Personally, I think it's both.
If you decide to reply (in regard to the boxarts) with "No one isn't giving me advice" I suggest you correct your attitude first. I'm sorry if I'm being too harsh, but I need to say the truth.
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#8, i don't promote Naruto, I'm just posting him there, it's not any different than Koopa posting his Koopa on his boxes, I'm doing the same, so screw off, I don't deface monuments, I had 3 simple problems that involved the police, I'm obsessed, but not enough to talk about him all the time. Also, you can't tell me to change my attitude, thats like telling a weak person to start working out. They never do it. It's my choice, so leave me alone.
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#9, That is the kind of additude Jbone Is talking about. He give's you advice,And you tell him to screw off.Very mature of you Rasengan_boi. Very mature.
And,If you Dont change that little additude of yours,It's gonna lead to you Being banned.
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#10, people tend to tell other users that they're not trying to be harsh, but they;re still trying to inflict some damage to the other user, Jbones had a knack for doing that to me
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The screen boarders on the back are a little weird, but I like the circular city thing on the front. I would reccomend taking that purple character from the top right on the front out though, he's kind of just "there".
Also, Naruto is distracting, but I understand you want to keep him there.
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Try and establish a character montage the viewers will understand! because right now i dont understand whats going on on your box! Yes i understand there is a world like theme going on but you should try and develop that idea and edit that purple circle making it into an earth or something :P ( i think that was the look you was going for) The two characters at the top right and left hand corner are badly placed, These are things you must take more notice of while making boxes. The character placement. I would also suggest taking the glow of the characters as it doset look to good or at least make them softer. Try organinising the back of the box in a way it will fill up more space and lower the opacity of the blur on the logo! other than that you've got an okay box :) long comment lol
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#12, good, because, like Koopa, I`m posting my dude, he post`s his Koopa from Mario, i post my R_B from Naruto
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#11 'Jbones Had a knack for doing that to me'. Really? Give me ONE other example were I wasn't giving you advice.
#14 but Koopa is different, not many people enjoy Naruto you know. I'm just saying that to HELP you.
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#14, In my opinion, there's a difference between Koopa's Koopa and your Naruto. I personally like reading Naruto, it's a weekly habit to read the new manga ASAP when it's released, but even I don't like it's placement. If someone wanted to steal this, it would be simple work in Photoshop to delete/edit what you have added to your box. I don't think Jbone was trying to give you a hard time, he was trying to help you with your presentation. I say keep Naruto in your presentation if you like, but do it off to a corner so that it's not so distracting. Incorporate a watermark into your design. There's a lot of ways to make sure people don't steal your stuff. As for your attitude you have at times, I tried saying the same to you, but you blew me off, too. You just didn't tell me to screw off. My other peeve with your personality is that people here begin to want to tell you what they think would improve your boxes and through that, your Rank, and you disregard them. I've never really seen you make an effort to make a box you've made better.
Take my advice (once more) or leave it, I don't care. I'm not being hurtful, but acting the way you do won't get you very far as an artist.
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#16, that was alot better than Jbone's way of "Not being harsh", and also, if he hates naruto, why the hell is Neji his avatar?
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#17 I never said the words "Not being harsh", read my post: "I'm sorry If I'm being too harsh". I also never said "I hate Naruto". I said most of the site dislikes it, so you can't judge (from that post) whether I do, or do not like it. I read the manga every once in a while, but I am not obsessed with it.
If you decide to quote me, at least do so properly.
Now, because I feel like I'm doing the wrong thing by not even commenting on the box, here's my critique. Cut out the Sonics better, put the exploding Earth instead of that purple thing, and just remove the back completely.
And you still did not answer my post #15...
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ahem...little credit for the super sonic please? its a nice though. =D
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#19, ok then...
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