Ok, this was my submission for the virtual console comp, but it looks like that isn't going to happen, so I decided not to let my hard work go the waste. This was made a few weeks back, and I created the temp form scratch, and even typed all the info on the back, anyway,hope you like it. I tried to give it a retro feel. Enjoy!
#2, the gray is supposed to sort of be a part of the temp, and they are somewhat going over the temp, idk if that makes sense, but, thanks!
The presentation is...okay. The back feels like an NES game. The front isn't all that great. Logo's fine. I don't mind the Mario & Luigi art, but try to keep things consistent with the actual game. You mentioned 16 Bit graphics, NES used 8 Bit. The world map you used was from Super Mario World for the SNES. That's what hurts this the most.
It's really good. :) Very official-looking. Problem is, the pictures on the cover are from Super Mario World and Mario & Luigi. Maybe if you used the map screen from the GBC version of SMB instead and renders of Mario and Luigi from the original SMB. But I'm nitpicking. :D
Ok, this was my submission for the virtual console comp, but it looks like that isn't going to happen, so I decided not to let my hard work go the waste. This was made a few weeks back, and I created the temp form scratch, and even typed all the info on the back, anyway,hope you like it. I tried to give it a retro feel. Enjoy!
#2, the gray is supposed to sort of be a part of the temp, and they are somewhat going over the temp, idk if that makes sense, but, thanks!
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ahhh! they're floating! lol.
=P
other than that i like it. :)
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I like it too, it's clean and attractive.
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The presentation is...okay. The back feels like an NES game. The front isn't all that great. Logo's fine. I don't mind the Mario & Luigi art, but try to keep things consistent with the actual game. You mentioned 16 Bit graphics, NES used 8 Bit. The world map you used was from Super Mario World for the SNES. That's what hurts this the most.
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#4, sorry, I don't know much about the old mario games/systems.
Thank you everyone!
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Sorry, but I don't really like it. The grey on the top and bottom make it look unprofessonal. But hey, what do I know?
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It's really good. :) Very official-looking. Problem is, the pictures on the cover are from Super Mario World and Mario & Luigi. Maybe if you used the map screen from the GBC version of SMB instead and renders of Mario and Luigi from the original SMB. But I'm nitpicking. :D
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