Well, there's a bunch of things that seem iffy here. I know you said it was a quickie, but it was posted, so I'll have to point them out. ):P
The part on the front where the box folds is way too sharp, maybe you could have used a long faded white bar with low opacity to cover up that side and give the corner a nice shine. I know the official logo is red, but with the overall theme of the box it doesn't really fit to me. Not sure what color would have been better but you know.
On the back, the text boxes are covering up a lot of the artwork on either side of the box, and it looks kinda weird. Lastly you forgot a Dev logo in the space marked at the bottom.
Overall, nice concept, but the execution wasn't so great.
Anyway, I like the box! But its kind of hard to understand what's going on. Everything's slightly blurry and there are a lot of glares / shiny stuff on the template. You seemed to have put some sort of glow on the spine, too.
Its hard to comment on the box, when everything else makes it kinda confusing to look at. Wish it was clear, crisp, and higher in quality!
Dude.
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Everything's great but the template.
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#2, so you're not gonna fav it?
Just another quickie.
Credit to yoshistar for template.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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Damnit Sentry, why must you post such an epic box right after mine?
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The spine on that temp looks a little weird, but epic box nevertheless.
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Well, there's a bunch of things that seem iffy here. I know you said it was a quickie, but it was posted, so I'll have to point them out. ):P
The part on the front where the box folds is way too sharp, maybe you could have used a long faded white bar with low opacity to cover up that side and give the corner a nice shine. I know the official logo is red, but with the overall theme of the box it doesn't really fit to me. Not sure what color would have been better but you know.
On the back, the text boxes are covering up a lot of the artwork on either side of the box, and it looks kinda weird. Lastly you forgot a Dev logo in the space marked at the bottom.
Overall, nice concept, but the execution wasn't so great.
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#5, Quickies are boxes I start but scrap midway through. I was about to toss this one but I thought it was good enough to post.
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I love everything but the template
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#6, Aah, I see, well, I'm sure you would have fixed all of those things were you to finish it.
Sorry for the hard critique.
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I like the box very much, except one little flaw.
The game is multiplatform, also on PS3 and PC; the teplate, however, says it's a 360 exclusive.
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This is really cool, but I don't like that template.
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#9 I don't think it is
I personally love that template. But anyway box seems a little crowded. Very well done though.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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I hate the tempmlate, but the box is absolutly awesome. 8.9/10, So +fav
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The template needs some work, but that's explainable.
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Hahaha, no one really likes the template, huh?
Anyway, I like the box! But its kind of hard to understand what's going on. Everything's slightly blurry and there are a lot of glares / shiny stuff on the template. You seemed to have put some sort of glow on the spine, too.
Its hard to comment on the box, when everything else makes it kinda confusing to look at. Wish it was clear, crisp, and higher in quality!
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What a piece of art..
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#14 I love it and I think that other people do as well it just isn't the right template for this particular box.
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I just gave you your 1337th fave.
Im beast I know.
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You gave it an unique twist, nice!
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I like it, except for the temp.
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