Don't like the outer edges of the box, but i wish they made a new game completely focused on Jhoto Pokemon. And whats with the sprites in the game image?
its good for a first box, i admit, but there are a few flaws.
You are a bit close to the edges with the text, and you should add a bit more description, or a picture that shows more about the games.
you should either make the people smaller and give them shadows in your picture to make them look more realistic, and nicer
or put the people of to the side standing on the box, not inside.
#4, don't advertise your boxes on someone elses boxes, thats terrible and rude.
and i say for your first box its an 8/10
but if you'd been doing it or a while... i wouldn't be as lenient...
but your not. keep up the good work, things get better with time...
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Don't like the outer edges of the box, but i wish they made a new game completely focused on Jhoto Pokemon. And whats with the sprites in the game image?
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Back is a total fail but front's alright
Bad nintendo logo and a pokemon game without the Pokemon company?!
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The front is Ok but hte back is awful 6/10
look at my box - link
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Thanks for critism and all but its my first box.
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#4, Dont advertise on others boxes
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its good for a first box, i admit, but there are a few flaws.
You are a bit close to the edges with the text, and you should add a bit more description, or a picture that shows more about the games.
you should either make the people smaller and give them shadows in your picture to make them look more realistic, and nicer
or put the people of to the side standing on the box, not inside.
#4, don't advertise your boxes on someone elses boxes, thats terrible and rude.
and i say for your first box its an 8/10
but if you'd been doing it or a while... i wouldn't be as lenient...
but your not. keep up the good work, things get better with time...
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