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Donkey Kong 64 DS box cover
By avatar Yoshario 1 on July 19th, 2009
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Yoshario 1 [ 1 decade ago ]

It's just my first box!

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jevangod 50 [ 1 decade ago ]

Not bad. But you shouldnt let the text on the back stick out so much.

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Ray Blade 40 [ 1 decade ago ]

Ooh, Jevan, don't lie.

It's your first box yes, so that means you can only get better. but as it is, this is quite bad. I do like however that you gave making an entire box, including a presentation, a try.

Some things I'd look into is getting a good Graphics Program, like Paint.NET, or GIMP for Windows, or Pixelmator or Compositor for Mac. Those have tons more features than your standard Paint program.

Overall I see effort, but as it's your first it's very low quality. The logo isn't too clean cut, and the composition (render placement, background choices) is a bit lacking. You've got a good idea though, so work at it. If you need any help, check out the Big Brothers/Big Sisters of VGBA or send me a PM. :]

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Yoshario 1 [ 1 decade ago ]

3# I see your point.

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YOYO 25 [ 1 decade ago ]

Not bad for a first, but I agree with Ray Blade.

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bluemike 13 [ 1 decade ago ]

Yeah you should give a try with other software...But i liked the effort!! :)

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burgerking13 1 [ 1 decade ago ]

nice box but i wish people were nice like that when i made my first box now almost half everybody on this cite are stuck ups and complete douche bags i didnt say every body is just alot are

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