Right...I don't want to sound too harsh, but it does still need alot more work.
I'm not trying to sound mean, but I suggest you work with Gimp for a while before submitting a box...
There should be a background for the back, and even the front; your logos on the front need to be cut out better.
The image on the front...needs to go and replaced with something cleaner.
Need a better Mario and Toad, google search "Planet Renders", they should have some.
I suggest you look at similar boxes to get the hand of what they should look like.
Just spend more time in GIMP and I'm sure you'll get better.
You should look into getting GIMP or Paint.net. Then get a general idea of how to work with one of them before submitting anymore boxes of this quality. You have good ideas, but you're not executing them well. Using Mario's hat as a screen border is really cool.
#5, Then you need to get more familiar with it. I don't know how to use it, but I'm sure plenty of people on the site do. Don't be afraid to ask someone for help. And use the Work In Progress section of the forum to get some good suggestions before submitting
how about change to this?
like native american religion to roman catholic, as to the laws of ecomienda way back when, but that's sort of irrelevant. way off the line, really. link
Right...I don't want to sound too harsh, but it does still need alot more work.
I'm not trying to sound mean, but I suggest you work with Gimp for a while before submitting a box...
There should be a background for the back, and even the front; your logos on the front need to be cut out better.
The image on the front...needs to go and replaced with something cleaner.
Need a better Mario and Toad, google search "Planet Renders", they should have some.
I suggest you look at similar boxes to get the hand of what they should look like.
Just spend more time in GIMP and I'm sure you'll get better.
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The box is good, just (not to sound harsh), is not well cut.
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O.K. I've slightly updated the front. (LOL look at Toad.)
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You should look into getting GIMP or Paint.net. Then get a general idea of how to work with one of them before submitting anymore boxes of this quality. You have good ideas, but you're not executing them well. Using Mario's hat as a screen border is really cool.
#5, Then you need to get more familiar with it. I don't know how to use it, but I'm sure plenty of people on the site do. Don't be afraid to ask someone for help. And use the Work In Progress section of the forum to get some good suggestions before submitting
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#4, Actually, I did use GIMP for this.
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LOL, Toad died! But seruiously, you should post your boxes in the W.I.P. thread before posting. Here's the link
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#5, really? go to planetrenders.net and get an account, youll see the difference.
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Why is Toad smiling? He's about to break his bones.
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Thats better, Now I suggest you follow the other suggestions and spend more time into these boxes. :)
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I'm working on Version 4...
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O.K, New Version! Now new facial expression on Toad, A sticker on the front saying how good it is, and back well-updated.
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how about change to this?
like native american religion to roman catholic, as to the laws of ecomienda way back when, but that's sort of irrelevant. way off the line, really.
link
(link to the right)
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Save as PNG, not JPG.
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