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Yoshi's Story DS box art cover
By avatar spypilot 42 on September 6th, 2009
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spypilot 42 [ 1 decade ago ]

my newest box, made for an example for the spypilot competition. credit:
numerobetically - template
tmrd - username logo
JDevil - yoshi's story logo.
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this box took me 4 hours to get right, i took my time and to my opinion, it is one of my best so far. (my others being wario bros, luigi vs donkey kong and bowsers inside story [the solo project]) so c&c as always and if you havent see my mario and luigi box i recomend you do: link
(also, if you decide to fav, i would appreaciate a comment, thnx)

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TheSlyder 41 [ 1 decade ago ]

Nicely done. I really can't find any complaints except for the use of Comic Sans font.

It's very clean, it's well composed, the colors work together well, I like the presentation.

Overall pretty nice job.

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Ray Blade 40 [ 1 decade ago ]

The back does a good front bad. The tagline is good, but the screenshot placement looks like you're trying to fill space, and the blue opaque box holding the description text is clashing with the bright yellow.

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spypilot 42 [ 1 decade ago ]

#2, as ive said before, my parents dont let me download fonts so i cant really get cool ones, but thanks man!
#3, it was either that or the thick stroke that you despise.
EDIT, back slightly changed, but not drastically.

Edited at 1 decade ago

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Drakxxx 46 [ 1 decade ago ]

The back looks pretty good to me, and everything flows nicely. It's a darn good job.

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Pixelfox 33 [ 1 decade ago ]

Not a fan of the back cover title, but nicely done nonetheless. :)

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tmrd 43 [ 1 decade ago ]

I really like it!! Just one question....
Why are you entering your own comp?

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spypilot 42 [ 1 decade ago ]

#7, im not, its just an example for what the boxes in round 1 should look like.

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tmrd 43 [ 1 decade ago ]

#8, Oh! I get it! I feel stupid...

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YoshiStar 46 [ 1 decade ago ]

I really like it! But I wish the drop shadow on the logo on the front was either lowered A LOT or removed completely ... or maybe kept the same, just change the direction so its not so far apart?

Its really good, but there's only one other problem. The brightness / contrast on some Yoshis are different from others (the Brawl render on the front and the SM64 DS one on the back). My suggestion is to play with the brightness / contrast until they all look similar.

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Js2Kings 34 [ 1 decade ago ]

Not bad of an example.

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StarMario22 34 [ 1 decade ago ]

Nice!
You should make the D green and S red, if you want.

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Silent Oblivion 45 [ 1 decade ago ]

All looking good, though I don't like the tagline and the brightness/contrast issue that YS brang up.

Fix these, and I'll happily favourite =)

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Manuel_Alejandro95 29 [ 1 decade ago ]

I love the front, but the lower left corner on the back gives the box a feeling of emptiness, but in overall is very good! +Fav
I wanna ask you a question... why you put the refection so far from the box?

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spypilot 42 [ 1 decade ago ]

#14, because i like to, it looks good, right?

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Ray Blade 40 [ 1 decade ago ]

That is MUCH better, the green on the back fits the scheme nicely, and the screens look proer now.

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spypilot 42 [ 1 decade ago ]

#16, but still no fav?

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YOYO 24 [ 1 decade ago ]

Looks good, I'll fav.

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Sonic the Hedgehog 38 [ 1 decade ago ]

Great job man! :)

Edited at 1 decade ago

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solardestruction 22 [ 1 decade ago ]

I would looooove for this to become a reality

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spypilot 42 [ 1 decade ago ]

UPDATED!
-saturation issues fixed.

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Glaedr 15 [ 1 decade ago ]

I like it. The way you got all the Yoshi's to fit on the front without making it look to crowded. +fav

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mario13 2 [ 1 decade ago ]

nice i followed through wip im glad its done

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