LOL at least the name is creative with this idea i would call it smash bros...vgboxart and if you add pictures in the back and explain me what is scea(first word in first text)maybe pics from dissida link and from brawl where snake appears link then i will fav
That's Sony Computer Entertainment of America, look on the front cover the logo even says it. Also "smash bros VGboxart"? that's not very original. I'm not going to put pics from SSBB either because I'm trying to show it's similarities but I don't want to take stuff right from SSBB, think of this more as a cross between Soul calibur and SSB.
I'm not going to have screens either as this game is fake. (Unless there is something good that would actually go with this.
#6, Well, you are quiet unpatient, anyway if you want comments, here i come.
The idea is fun, but the making of the box, not that much:
- on the front, renders are not so precise, the background, especially the black part is not fitting other colors, may be trying an orange/yellow colors as dominant on Snake. the blurry borders beetwen other colors doesn't make it either, may be because it's going on black color
- for the back, the background is a bit empty and also color is too plain, making the same kind of separation will may be give something more (reminding the blue color over Cloud for example)
about the font, the gear one doesn't really fit, also the exclamation point is not the good font, keeping the font use for "beatdown" should be a good choice
about the text, it's quiet big an there is some mistakes in it (squre), also the shadow is not present everywhere (on ponctuation)
the feature box also quiet big and going over technical info
your previous works were a bit cleaner, you shoul WIP more your boxes and collecting advices and technical tips and i'm quiet sure you will make more precise things
it's quiet important to listen other people advice and point of view, quiet the only way to go far and have fun with it, better than only doing things in is own way and thinking it's the best in the world
my comments were made to help you, not to make you feel bad or hungry, take your time, go on WIP and you'll appreciate it more
those comment are not my personnal taste as for a thing like that i won't turn it that way, they are only about what are wrong
PS: i'm sending you this while i'm at work, i guess other people have also a schedule that doesn't allow them to write as soon as a box is upload, so be patient
#8, I'm sorry for being impatient but other people upload a box at the same time as me and get 8 comments in like 10 min. I really do appreciate your comment though thanks. I'll try to take all of your ideas in mind and maybe I'll update it.
#7, so do you think that if I upload it at a better time more people will critic it as #8 did? Again sorry for being impatient.
It's an amusing idea as others have said, but the design is really chaotic. None of the renders you used really compliment one another, so it kind of falls flat as a design.
I'd recommend maybe experimenting with various filters and color alterations with the character renders you'd like to use in attempts to make the characters look like they belong on the same box together.
A design like this should definitely have screenshots of some kind in my opinion, so pretty much anything from any 3D fighting game should do the trick.
#10, Okay , thanks for the tips. I really appreciate the the criticism.
So, I need to make the renders compliment each other. I know what you mean by using filters and stuff, I just don't know how to use them efficiently enough to make the renders belong together.
I can only say one thing. Your work is WAY better than mine, perhaps you should make the colors of everyone sort of the same, but you still did awesome work, fav. Perhaps you can add some images(If there is a similar game...... OH WAIT! YOU CAN TAKE PICTURES OF SNAKE IN BRAWL!)
Cross over fighting game like SSBB.
I just know this box is going to get ignored.
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LOL at least the name is creative with this idea i would call it smash bros...vgboxart and if you add pictures in the back and explain me what is scea(first word in first text)maybe pics from dissida link and from brawl where snake appears link then i will fav
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#2, You don't know what SCEA is? *facepalm
That's Sony Computer Entertainment of America, look on the front cover the logo even says it. Also "smash bros VGboxart"? that's not very original. I'm not going to put pics from SSBB either because I'm trying to show it's similarities but I don't want to take stuff right from SSBB, think of this more as a cross between Soul calibur and SSB.
I'm not going to have screens either as this game is fake. (Unless there is something good that would actually go with this.
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lol.
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#4, what's funny?
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Thanks for ignoring my box everyone. Appreciate it.
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#6, dude, you waited four hours only and people don't typically comment much on nighttime boxes.
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#6, Well, you are quiet unpatient, anyway if you want comments, here i come.
The idea is fun, but the making of the box, not that much:
- on the front, renders are not so precise, the background, especially the black part is not fitting other colors, may be trying an orange/yellow colors as dominant on Snake. the blurry borders beetwen other colors doesn't make it either, may be because it's going on black color
- for the back, the background is a bit empty and also color is too plain, making the same kind of separation will may be give something more (reminding the blue color over Cloud for example)
about the font, the gear one doesn't really fit, also the exclamation point is not the good font, keeping the font use for "beatdown" should be a good choice
about the text, it's quiet big an there is some mistakes in it (squre), also the shadow is not present everywhere (on ponctuation)
the feature box also quiet big and going over technical info
your previous works were a bit cleaner, you shoul WIP more your boxes and collecting advices and technical tips and i'm quiet sure you will make more precise things
it's quiet important to listen other people advice and point of view, quiet the only way to go far and have fun with it, better than only doing things in is own way and thinking it's the best in the world
my comments were made to help you, not to make you feel bad or hungry, take your time, go on WIP and you'll appreciate it more
those comment are not my personnal taste as for a thing like that i won't turn it that way, they are only about what are wrong
PS: i'm sending you this while i'm at work, i guess other people have also a schedule that doesn't allow them to write as soon as a box is upload, so be patient
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#8, I'm sorry for being impatient but other people upload a box at the same time as me and get 8 comments in like 10 min. I really do appreciate your comment though thanks. I'll try to take all of your ideas in mind and maybe I'll update it.
#7, so do you think that if I upload it at a better time more people will critic it as #8 did? Again sorry for being impatient.
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It's an amusing idea as others have said, but the design is really chaotic. None of the renders you used really compliment one another, so it kind of falls flat as a design.
I'd recommend maybe experimenting with various filters and color alterations with the character renders you'd like to use in attempts to make the characters look like they belong on the same box together.
A design like this should definitely have screenshots of some kind in my opinion, so pretty much anything from any 3D fighting game should do the trick.
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#10, Okay , thanks for the tips. I really appreciate the the criticism.
So, I need to make the renders compliment each other. I know what you mean by using filters and stuff, I just don't know how to use them efficiently enough to make the renders belong together.
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I can only say one thing. Your work is WAY better than mine, perhaps you should make the colors of everyone sort of the same, but you still did awesome work, fav. Perhaps you can add some images(If there is a similar game...... OH WAIT! YOU CAN TAKE PICTURES OF SNAKE IN BRAWL!)
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#12, I think I'm just gonna do an update to my Metal gear awesome box soon.
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lol.....
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#14, lol @ your box.
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