So yeah, my latest. I put a load of work into this - I made a lot of the stuff, and rendered the rest. I hope that you like it, and comments and favs are obviously more than welcome! :P
Hmm very, plain IMO. I think the text on the back info could be more interesting and stand out. the front seems to be missing something from the middle, how about a faded Bowser head that you see when you lose a life on Mario games?
CONS
shouldnt be rated teen
i like the yoshi touch but hes not in the game much
the cover seems to be missing somthing
i would have made the screen shot a bit bigger
PROS
I do like the yoshi
i like the colorful title on back
layout of back is nice
background
twists to game
so over all
thats a three point five of ffive
Nice. I think it's not a bad box, but it has some kinks to work out.
1. Back should have at least 2 screenshots (in my opinion)
2. Rated Teen? If it was Smash Bros. I'd rate it teen, but this should be Everyone.
3. Toad and Yoshi renders on back are good, but shouldn't be so big. If you shrunk them then you'd have enough room for the second screenshot.
4. Front should have something. It seems as though something is missing.
So yeah, my latest. I put a load of work into this - I made a lot of the stuff, and rendered the rest. I hope that you like it, and comments and favs are obviously more than welcome! :P
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Nice box, but two things.
-It shouldn't be rated teen
-Yoshi isn't in much of the game, so I don't think he should be advertised on the back.
Other than that, very good! 4/5
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Hmm very, plain IMO. I think the text on the back info could be more interesting and stand out. the front seems to be missing something from the middle, how about a faded Bowser head that you see when you lose a life on Mario games?
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Thanks for the comments guys.
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Too plain. The general layout of the front is just unappealing. It's far too symmetrical.
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This is not one of your best, sorry. I don't know why but it doesn't appeal to me and it is very plain.
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CONS
shouldnt be rated teen
i like the yoshi touch but hes not in the game much
the cover seems to be missing somthing
i would have made the screen shot a bit bigger
PROS
I do like the yoshi
i like the colorful title on back
layout of back is nice
background
twists to game
so over all
thats a three point five of ffive
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Nice. I think it's not a bad box, but it has some kinks to work out.
1. Back should have at least 2 screenshots (in my opinion)
2. Rated Teen? If it was Smash Bros. I'd rate it teen, but this should be Everyone.
3. Toad and Yoshi renders on back are good, but shouldn't be so big. If you shrunk them then you'd have enough room for the second screenshot.
4. Front should have something. It seems as though something is missing.
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