Red font, font falls out of the blue box, blank space at the bottom of the text, design your own hedgehog idea + render, otherwise, the back is great.
I really loved your front until I saw Chip.
Ugh.
Sonic looks discusting, shadow has an odd, random yellowglow about him, the chacters are crudely placed, back text and tag are horrid, logo is hard to see, the mario-ish part of the logo shouldn't need to be explained, Chip makes no sense, did you even play Unleashed? And give credit where credit is required. Those are MY screen borders... I could go on...
Sorry to go all out but I couldn't help it... You should work on your technique, not just being able to cut and paste renders. Keep working, You'll get it!
Erm... I really don't know what to say, it's definitely not one of your best boxes. The front sonic looks weird, the effects of the other characters on the front are inconsistent, you have different ones for each character, try to keep each one the same. There is a spelling mistake in the tag line, the blue box with red text in just doesn't work, pick a white text with a drop shadow or stroke. Also the logo on the front is awful its the sonic the hedgehog movie logo mixed with your super mario wii box logo, they're different fonts and formats so they don't work. Use the same screen border for the create a hedgehog screen shot as the rest of the screen shots. And i think i see 2 types of font on the back, the tag line and the screen shot description (Create a hedgehog) are the same, and then a different font for the game description, make the game description and screen shot description the same font and make the tag line stand out more.
#19, yes I played Unleashed before
In fact, I have the game
why does that matters?
EDIT:Now I remenber, he disappear/died at the end(even though I've never beaten the game, I watched the end on YOUTUBE) but some THING can happen, that made him back to Sonic
Hey can you PM me that son render at the top!
(Do you have the full thing from the sonic channel, i'd prefere that.)
Box:
Front:I love the front execpt the son he looks very strange, as you dont jump with your feet frontwards do you?
Back:the back screen shots and images are good but the text is horriable, as it sometimes starts to SLIP inTO CAPITALS and THEN gos into LOWER CASE then CAPITALS AGAIN, How agnoying is that.
Overall a great box i just focused on the bad because eveyone had said the good (8/10 Fav +)
I dont like how you took half of sonic and just duplicated him on the other side cause it looks weird. Cause I have never seen someone run with both feet in front of them at the same time.
Credit to Planet Renders for the Super Sonic on the back
And Jevangod for the template
It kinda looks like they're flowing, eventhough Sonic's jumping and the rest is flying
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Front is good, back isn't. Try using a different font. I'll still fav. though.
(BTW, who's that in front of Eggman?)
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#2, It's the person/animal in Sonic Unleashed who helped Sonic, and Sonic helped him, too
How is the back bad?
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Red font, font falls out of the blue box, blank space at the bottom of the text, design your own hedgehog idea + render, otherwise, the back is great.
I really loved your front until I saw Chip.
Ugh.
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#4, Why is Chip an "Ugh"
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What have I done XC
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#6, For a second I was gonna say "WHAT?"
But I see why you said that
Sonic does look like he's beening chased
Or Maybe you're saying something else
BTW if anyone wants the Sonic by my username logo
just tell me, I can PM it
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Updated a second version
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Looks nice. The character designing is kind of wierd though... Also, Where did you find the Sonic above the box?
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great almost as good as your mario box but no quite their
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Nice box, but the text on the back doesnt suit it.
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#5, Chip is a horrible character.
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#9, It from Sonic Channel:http://sonic.sega.jp I just rendered it out
#10, How's Chip a horrible character
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on the back, dont put a border around the font. other than that its awesome
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The front is good, but that sonic from unleashed looks so messed up.
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Sonic looks discusting, shadow has an odd, random yellowglow about him, the chacters are crudely placed, back text and tag are horrid, logo is hard to see, the mario-ish part of the logo shouldn't need to be explained, Chip makes no sense, did you even play Unleashed? And give credit where credit is required. Those are MY screen borders... I could go on...
Sorry to go all out but I couldn't help it... You should work on your technique, not just being able to cut and paste renders. Keep working, You'll get it!
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#16, Yellowglows is Shadow flying
Why doesn't Chip make sense
Really sorry about the screenborders
Forgot to credit that
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Erm... I really don't know what to say, it's definitely not one of your best boxes. The front sonic looks weird, the effects of the other characters on the front are inconsistent, you have different ones for each character, try to keep each one the same. There is a spelling mistake in the tag line, the blue box with red text in just doesn't work, pick a white text with a drop shadow or stroke. Also the logo on the front is awful its the sonic the hedgehog movie logo mixed with your super mario wii box logo, they're different fonts and formats so they don't work. Use the same screen border for the create a hedgehog screen shot as the rest of the screen shots. And i think i see 2 types of font on the back, the tag line and the screen shot description (Create a hedgehog) are the same, and then a different font for the game description, make the game description and screen shot description the same font and make the tag line stand out more.
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#17, That doesn't make sense....
Again, did you even play Unleashed?
Well, that isn't too important to me, but still....
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My hand shook.
Double Post.
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#18, I'll keep that in mind next time
THANKS
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#19, yes I played Unleashed before
In fact, I have the game
why does that matters?
EDIT:Now I remenber, he disappear/died at the end(even though I've never beaten the game, I watched the end on YOUTUBE) but some THING can happen, that made him back to Sonic
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#13, i didn't say chip was a horrible charicter
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Cool looking, but could use a different background for the back of the cover. And the text on the back is bad. But overall, it's cool.
8/10
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Hey can you PM me that son render at the top!
(Do you have the full thing from the sonic channel, i'd prefere that.)
Box:
Front:I love the front execpt the son he looks very strange, as you dont jump with your feet frontwards do you?
Back:the back screen shots and images are good but the text is horriable, as it sometimes starts to SLIP inTO CAPITALS and THEN gos into LOWER CASE then CAPITALS AGAIN, How agnoying is that.
Overall a great box i just focused on the bad because eveyone had said the good (8/10 Fav +)
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#23, I was talking about #12, sorry
#24, #25, Thanks
#25, I'll PM you both renders you want when I can
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I dont like how you took half of sonic and just duplicated him on the other side cause it looks weird. Cause I have never seen someone run with both feet in front of them at the same time.
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