There's so many reasons why this is bad. The background is horrid, the overall quality is terrible (I did read your excuse, but it's not even at the point where I can see a good concept and give that a pass). The presentation is just the same horrid background you used on the box, not good.
I'm guessing you are using MS Paint. Don't. There are FREE programs like Paint.NET and GIMP that can provide similar results to Photoshop. Again, they are free and are tried and true tools.
I won't even bother giving you a point rating, this is an unoriginal, sloppy design.
and I purposely made the background come outside of the actual box on purpose because to me it helps the box stand out more than if it was just a white around the box
Whether you say you did it on purpose or not, it still doesn't look good. It honestly doesn't look like something done on Paint.NET. I'm thinking you should do something with different colors for the presentation background, and use actual Sonic the Hedgehog and Sega logos instead of type them in such a plain font.
Whether you say you did it on purpose or not, it still doesn't look good. It honestly doesn't look like something done on Paint.NET. I'm thinking you should do something with different colors for the presentation background, and use actual Sonic the Hedgehog and Sega logos instead of type them in such a plain font.
#1, yeah you gotta think of another excuse because blaming your computer doesn't cut it any more
ok onto the box, um, it's very bad. No improvements at all. You better start using WIP forums soon or you won't be here for much longer...
COME ON DRAKXXX SORT THIS 11 YEAR OLD OUT!
i lol'ed when you said *may add a back depending on how much people want a back* this box is bad enough with a front, also i agree with #2, #4, #5, & #6, #7, #8,
also make two different backgrounds, one for the box, one for the presentation.
inst much better...hey maybe you should go look at some tutorial's that MIGHT help....ether way if you keep up with this poor quality crap.....you will be banned
Ok my dumb computer automatically saved it to a GIF again so I couldnt go back and fix the quality (thats why its bad quality)
also i will edit out sonics hand thats sticking out to the right later im really busy right now (and I JUST noticed it)
*may add a back depending on how much people want a back*
please rate out of 10 and no negative criticism at all only good constructive criticism (that means no cussing)
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There's so many reasons why this is bad. The background is horrid, the overall quality is terrible (I did read your excuse, but it's not even at the point where I can see a good concept and give that a pass). The presentation is just the same horrid background you used on the box, not good.
I'm guessing you are using MS Paint. Don't. There are FREE programs like Paint.NET and GIMP that can provide similar results to Photoshop. Again, they are free and are tried and true tools.
I won't even bother giving you a point rating, this is an unoriginal, sloppy design.
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I use paint.net
and I purposely made the background come outside of the actual box on purpose because to me it helps the box stand out more than if it was just a white around the box
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I Don't like how the background comes out. You should edit the background in the box and keep the same background out. It dosen't fit in with sonic.
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Whether you say you did it on purpose or not, it still doesn't look good. It honestly doesn't look like something done on Paint.NET. I'm thinking you should do something with different colors for the presentation background, and use actual Sonic the Hedgehog and Sega logos instead of type them in such a plain font.
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Whether you say you did it on purpose or not, it still doesn't look good. It honestly doesn't look like something done on Paint.NET. I'm thinking you should do something with different colors for the presentation background, and use actual Sonic the Hedgehog and Sega logos instead of type them in such a plain font.
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#1, yeah you gotta think of another excuse because blaming your computer doesn't cut it any more
ok onto the box, um, it's very bad. No improvements at all. You better start using WIP forums soon or you won't be here for much longer...
COME ON DRAKXXX SORT THIS 11 YEAR OLD OUT!
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epic fail
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i lol'ed when you said *may add a back depending on how much people want a back* this box is bad enough with a front, also i agree with #2, #4, #5, & #6, #7, #8,
also make two different backgrounds, one for the box, one for the presentation.
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#9, ok I will edit out this background then and add a new one in version 2 since so many people dont like it
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OK I added a new background plus I did the glow feature on the box to give it a better presentation
so rate version 2 not version 1
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This is better but it needs alot of improvement. Try getting an image that isn't stretched?
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inst much better...hey maybe you should go look at some tutorial's that MIGHT help....ether way if you keep up with this poor quality crap.....you will be banned
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Ok #12 said it was better (good quality) and now #13 you say its bad quality.. so which one is it??
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#14, Did you read #12? They said it was better, but also said it still needed A LOT of improvement.
It's still not good. Try studying boxes and designs that look good to you, and as #13 mentioned, check up some tutorials.
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Back and background aren't the same thing dude.
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I know, I changed the bakground and said I would add a back if people requested it duh.
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you need to really improve dude. 3/5
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Fresh and Innovative.
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#19, STOP IT.
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#19 STOP ENCOURAGING HIM!!!
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