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L.A. Noire box art cover
By avatar a-beast-of-art 39 on January 13th, 2011
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a-beast-of-art 39 [ 9 years ago ]

Im really excited about this game, so I poured my enthuiasm into this. Alot of editing went into this, and i even edited the temp into 3d and added little touches to make it that much more official. I worked really hard on this, and I would appreciate that if you are reading this, you leave a comment telling me how to improve, because alot of my boxes get ignored and I really need help to improve. Thanks- ABOA

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MattStar 48 [ 9 years ago ]

I feel like the colored screens are clashing, IDK.

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a-beast-of-art 39 [ 9 years ago ]

#2, I tried making them black and white, but it just did't look right. Any ideas on what else I coud do to make them look better?

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slimd1995 27 [ 9 years ago ]

I agree with MattStar, but I also feel like they wouldn't look very good in black & white either. I guess I'm just not feeling the entire box. There's nothing technically wrong with it, it's just boring.

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Prong1978 18 [ 9 years ago ]

I would go the opposite way and add a little more color elsewhere to balance it out. Perhaps the title, "Collector's Edition" and Rockstar Logo would balance things if they were in color. Then again, it might make it worse. Either way, it looks nice and it's different than the other LA Noir boxes.

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wasa-bi 7 [ 9 years ago ]

the colored screens don't fit and you sure have to work on the text makeup. you ignored the type area, the text is too close on the edges and a bit more line spacing makes reading a lot more comfy/pleasing for the eye if you are using almost just caps.

While the logo is one of the official ones (on the front) I'd try to give it some highlight. Make it a bit brighter, so it stands out more. I'd also try not to place it in the guys face like you did, even though the face is basicly just black ;) Talking about the guy: His arm seems cut off/too small.

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wasa-bi 7 [ 9 years ago ]

OH! And it doesn't make much sense to change the rockstar logo, but not the bluray one on the back. you should make both black and white or both colored.

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a-beast-of-art 39 [ 9 years ago ]

Thank you all for the suggestions. I'll work on this today and hopefully have it updated tonight

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