The logo is very small, and needs to better placement. I nearly missed it at my first glance, and the first glance is what makes someone curious.
There are some things that needs to be removed from the jester, namely his little shadow and the white areas by his head.
There is no ESRB or PEGI rating.
The jester is in a very cantadicting style. Making it more "sketchy" would work better.
But it is, as stated, a good concept! Keep it up! :)
I couldn't resist ;)
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It's a good concept, but it needs some work:
The logo is very small, and needs to better placement. I nearly missed it at my first glance, and the first glance is what makes someone curious.
There are some things that needs to be removed from the jester, namely his little shadow and the white areas by his head.
There is no ESRB or PEGI rating.
The jester is in a very cantadicting style. Making it more "sketchy" would work better.
But it is, as stated, a good concept! Keep it up! :)
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