Hey guys, this is my second box! I'd like to give credit to Titan38, Scorpion Soldier, Cerium, and tat76. Please give any critiques and tips. Enjoy! :D
For a second box, its not bad. Some pointers though, I would try and make the back match the front, at least on a color scheme. The back is rushed and I can tell you didnt know what to do with it and that is normal when your first starting out to do this. Making the screenshots so bit only says that you didnt know what to do with all the open space and making them bigger was just to fill it out. You should make them much smaller, add a description of the game. And if you still have too much open space, you can always type out some features and stuff like that. Also the green line on the spine is making it very hard to read. There are other things too but first try working with what I just said. But its not bad.
Hey guys, this is my second box! I'd like to give credit to Titan38, Scorpion Soldier, Cerium, and tat76. Please give any critiques and tips. Enjoy! :D
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For a second box, its not bad. Some pointers though, I would try and make the back match the front, at least on a color scheme. The back is rushed and I can tell you didnt know what to do with it and that is normal when your first starting out to do this. Making the screenshots so bit only says that you didnt know what to do with all the open space and making them bigger was just to fill it out. You should make them much smaller, add a description of the game. And if you still have too much open space, you can always type out some features and stuff like that. Also the green line on the spine is making it very hard to read. There are other things too but first try working with what I just said. But its not bad.
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#2, I was thinking of adding a description, but I checked and the official box doesn't have one, just reviews. Ill try to fix it
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updated!
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I think a mix of versions 1 and 2 would be perfect. the lighting of version 1, but the layout of the back on version 2
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