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This is my first box and a hypothetical Italian version. If you like it, I can do it in English.
Hope you like it!
[ Box updated on March 17th, 2012 ] [ original ]
Pokémon Versione Cielo Box Cover Comments
Comment on Gizzeta's Pokémon Versione Cielo Box Art / Cover.
Add a few bits to the front like age rating and Nintendo's logo and it's pretty damn good for a first!
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Thanks for the comment and for the advice! :) Do you think it's better re-upload the new one when ready?
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@Gizzeta If you click the Owner Tools button at the top right, you can update this box without uploading an entirely new one. :)
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Too much presentation around ^^ The box moves out of focus, lol.
Its very good for a first one! I like the idea of flying pokemon as a special game. The back's great! Maybe you could work on the front on the logo a bit more. The "Sky-Version" should be a bit more special. Not TOO fancy of course, but maybe a little more in focus :) For the rest: Good work! :)
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The Pokemon logo and characters seem a bit overbearing in the presentation. They distract from the most important part of the image.
From what I can tell, it's a nice piece. A few of the Pokemon don't look entirely natural within their environment (bird on the left, for example), but some adjustments to their lighting/color would help (a subtle blue/green overlay - nothing drastic of course). It definitely strays from the usual Pokemon formula, which has grown as tedious as Rockstar's GTA covers.
Would you happen to have a printable? What's posted here is pretty small.
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Much better than other Pokemon boxes, good job! :D
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great for a first! Just a tip, never "over-do" your presentation. It takes away from the glory of the box. Also, the pokemon logo is bigger than the box itself, your presentation should only have your user name, and maybe the title of the box in small writing. But it still earns a fav.
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Thank you all for your advices! I will try to get (it) better. :)
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