you have just copy and pasted parts of the review of the game, so the sentences don't quite make sense, in the case of it being a video game box. so and original analogy of what happens in the game would be a good start. plus, the pegi logos are blurry, and the front logo is squished and the reflection could use some work too. have u ever used the w.i.p section on the forum?, should post ur boxes on there first for poiners. :), can save u a lot of aggro when u post and then u get like me..giving u 4/5 points to improve on. plus also the total presentation is important too, like the box should be centered and i dislike the fact the republic commando's head is almost as big as the box itself. its very distracting, hope this helps in ur future boxes, :)
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you have just copy and pasted parts of the review of the game, so the sentences don't quite make sense, in the case of it being a video game box. so and original analogy of what happens in the game would be a good start. plus, the pegi logos are blurry, and the front logo is squished and the reflection could use some work too. have u ever used the w.i.p section on the forum?, should post ur boxes on there first for poiners. :), can save u a lot of aggro when u post and then u get like me..giving u 4/5 points to improve on. plus also the total presentation is important too, like the box should be centered and i dislike the fact the republic commando's head is almost as big as the box itself. its very distracting, hope this helps in ur future boxes, :)
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Nice work man.
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Nice one man .
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I'm trying to get better, and it's great to have your support.
Tank You guys.
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