I like how you continued the arrows onto the back (I think it would be much nicer if the arrows on the back, looked similar in style to the ones on the front) I also don't really like how the second arrow of the tagline is kinda sticking to the plastic :/ I'd suggest to make it a bit smaller so it's got more free space around it.
I think the features description on the back would look better if it were another color than the dark orange (it's clashing with the blue strokes that are underneath) but these are just the only things I could come up with and which you could try to improve. The rest of the box looks great ;)
Oh, I didn't even notice the arrow sticking to the plastic, thanks for that. I agree with you on these things, most likely I will update it and make it better. Thanks ;)
@Martiniii332 I've also noticed, Elise is appearing twice on the front, don't you find that a little wierd? :p I'd suggest to remove one of them, or just replace one of the renders with a different character.
On the back, the blue text on light blue background is not giving enough punch. Plus, the front is getting more stuff than the back, it's heavier. I would put the reviews on the front to the back to fill more.
I would remove the exclusive content on the front. I find them annoying on real boxes, that's why I prefer custom boxes like on these sites.
The SSX logo is bumping right on the EA logo. Maybe you could make it a little smaller since it's huge already, it should not be a big deal. You can also lower the PEGI 3 on the front if you need more space.
Lastly, in the trademarks legal text on the back, it is saying "Game Title is a blablabla". You should replace it with the name of the game. :)
It may sounds as I rant against the box, but I am not. The rendering are excellent, and the layout is nice. Just a couple of details I am thinking about it could make a difference.
I appreciate your criticism. I was actually expecting someone to say something about the back text. I will take on that. As for the exclusive content, I added it there not only because the original had it, but the front would look empty without it as well. The logo bumping will be taken care of, I haven't noticed that either. And darn, I was hoping no one would look at the legal text. Since I do not have the fonts (and I went and searched for them too) I could not change anything without it going out of whack. Thanks :)
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Credit to Scorpion Soldier for the EU template.
Special thanks to MattStar and Bastart for helping me with a few things on this box.
I have not much to say about this one, so enjoy and thanks for viewing!
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Credit also to Bastart for many of the renders!
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UPDATE: I realized my sig was annoying so I downsized and edited it.
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Nice one Martiniii!!!!
I really like it!
I just see you get better every day!
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Thanks man!
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Really nice!
I like how you continued the arrows onto the back (I think it would be much nicer if the arrows on the back, looked similar in style to the ones on the front) I also don't really like how the second arrow of the tagline is kinda sticking to the plastic :/ I'd suggest to make it a bit smaller so it's got more free space around it.
I think the features description on the back would look better if it were another color than the dark orange (it's clashing with the blue strokes that are underneath) but these are just the only things I could come up with and which you could try to improve. The rest of the box looks great ;)
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Oh, I didn't even notice the arrow sticking to the plastic, thanks for that. I agree with you on these things, most likely I will update it and make it better. Thanks ;)
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@Martiniii332 I've also noticed, Elise is appearing twice on the front, don't you find that a little wierd? :p I'd suggest to remove one of them, or just replace one of the renders with a different character.
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@Bastart Arrrggghhhh. Haha. Yeah I will replace it, thanks Bastart!
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On the back, the blue text on light blue background is not giving enough punch. Plus, the front is getting more stuff than the back, it's heavier. I would put the reviews on the front to the back to fill more.
I would remove the exclusive content on the front. I find them annoying on real boxes, that's why I prefer custom boxes like on these sites.
The SSX logo is bumping right on the EA logo. Maybe you could make it a little smaller since it's huge already, it should not be a big deal. You can also lower the PEGI 3 on the front if you need more space.
Lastly, in the trademarks legal text on the back, it is saying "Game Title is a blablabla". You should replace it with the name of the game. :)
It may sounds as I rant against the box, but I am not. The rendering are excellent, and the layout is nice. Just a couple of details I am thinking about it could make a difference.
Anyway, nice job.
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I appreciate your criticism. I was actually expecting someone to say something about the back text. I will take on that. As for the exclusive content, I added it there not only because the original had it, but the front would look empty without it as well. The logo bumping will be taken care of, I haven't noticed that either. And darn, I was hoping no one would look at the legal text. Since I do not have the fonts (and I went and searched for them too) I could not change anything without it going out of whack. Thanks :)
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This is great! I think it's your best yet.
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Thanks man! I appreciate it!
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Update.
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much better ;)
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Nice work...
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Thanks!
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Yeah, nice one! You perfectly captured the atmosphere of the game. A lot of snow and a stack of fun!
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Haha thanks man! Glad I pulled it off well!
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