Yes, I am aware that it kinda, well, sucks. It's my first. I'm not trying to be like *shudders* Mav Wolf or any kind of troll. This is a dream game of mine that I so wish for.
tip:
use official template
make sure nothing is distorted (both the teen and seal look stretched)
dont forget a dev logo like nintendo
use a more suitable font and font color for the title, make sure the placement is right.
"reloaded" doesnt sound right for a kid icarus game.
and overall, the box is dull because the image is very plain.
Okay, guys. I really appreciate the fact that I got non-B.S. constructive criticism. I am going to keep the title, but I am working on an update right now. (Literally, my Paint window is open.)
Well, it's your first, so I wouldn't expect anything mind-blowing just yet. Keep working with whatever program you use to make boxes and you'll get better. I suggest the critiques forum though. ;)
GIMP a virus lol! Thats funny! Just explain it to him/her about it. Show him/her the site. I used to use Gimp. I now use Photoshop which is more expensive and give a much better result. but Gimp is one the top free programs out there.
Yes, I am aware that it kinda, well, sucks. It's my first. I'm not trying to be like *shudders* Mav Wolf or any kind of troll. This is a dream game of mine that I so wish for.
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tip:
use official template
make sure nothing is distorted (both the teen and seal look stretched)
dont forget a dev logo like nintendo
use a more suitable font and font color for the title, make sure the placement is right.
"reloaded" doesnt sound right for a kid icarus game.
and overall, the box is dull because the image is very plain.
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#1, I wish ALL new people had your attitude.
#2, agreed
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and if you choose not to use the offifcial template, give credit where due.
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Okay, guys. I really appreciate the fact that I got non-B.S. constructive criticism. I am going to keep the title, but I am working on an update right now. (Literally, my Paint window is open.)
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#5,
DONT. USE. PAINT.
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Well, it's your first, so I wouldn't expect anything mind-blowing just yet. Keep working with whatever program you use to make boxes and you'll get better. I suggest the critiques forum though. ;)
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#6, It's all I can get for free. Because I can't run GIMP on my PC. (Housemate thinks it's a virus and refuses.)
#7, Thanks a lot
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GIMP? A virus? I use GIMP and it' amazing. I really do consider it. I can assure you it has no viruses. But it's up to whomever makes that decision.
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Ah... better. Please rate.
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and that is why you dont use paint...
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#6, hey i use paint
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#12, and that is why you arent very good.
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#13 rofl. agreed. xD
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#14, even though his last box was questionable.
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#14, even though his Shadow box was questionable.
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#15, sorry for triple post, but I meant his Shadow Box.
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#16, not if you have EYES.
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#18, LOL...
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#19, we're just having a blast arent we?
=P
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#20, oh you have NO idea.
=]
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GIMP a virus lol! Thats funny! Just explain it to him/her about it. Show him/her the site. I used to use Gimp. I now use Photoshop which is more expensive and give a much better result. but Gimp is one the top free programs out there.
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Is it better now or before. I'm making update 3 as wii speak.
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Update 3 is from scratch, so it may take a while.
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Problems I see are that its too simple and its squished.
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the template looks bad
logo font is awful
and the esrb, players choice and nintende are bad
1.5/5
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