Hi
So this is my Temple of Osiris box
Really excited for this!
Please leave me some feedback; I plan to update this box as it's far from perfect.
15/10/14 - Updated box. Thanks for everyone's feedback, I hope you like it! If you can't see the update, view in full and you should see it.
[ Box updated on October 15th, 2014 ] [ original ]
Lara Croft and the Temple of Osiris Box Cover Comments
Comment on TheTombRaider's Lara Croft and the Temple of Osiris Box Art / Cover.
Nice so far the back seems a bit empty I think this space could be filled with more or bigger screenshots.... Also maybe make Lara bigger on the front cover. I like the idea and cant wait to see this finished. Good work Nathan
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Thanks Vince, just sent you a Private Message, but you've already given improvements so my message is pointless now...
But anyway, I'll take your points into consideration, thank you
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Amazing Box Nathan......Keep Up Your Work....
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The front turned out really good, I don't like the text on the back though. The red seems a bit too strong to me, it should be more washed out and look as if it's on the paper. My advice: Lower the opacity a bit so that you can see the paper texture beneath it! ;)
Also, there is a little bit too much negative space at the top, maybe you could fill that out with a spicy tagline or some review quotes. ;)
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I actually did that at first, I deleted and hadn't even realised.
I'll definitely include that in my update :)
Thanks aldimon + Iman
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Beautiful and deluxe
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Thank you :)
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Nice Work
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Nice ;)
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Thank you both :)
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Hey man, you should definitely change the color of the text to a brown, the red doesn't exactly hand-written. Also, that IGN quote is a bit too long.
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I will update soon, thanks for this :)
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