There's a nice color scheme that flows throughout the box but Arno on the front has a completely different lighting situation than his background and doesn't look right compared to the rest of the box. Add some lighting elements around him in the foreground or something. The logo looks really weird with the symbol being so big next to the text, I would fade the logo behind the text and make the text centered and bigger or ditch the symbol all together and make the text bigger. I would find a different background too for the front because blimps like that didn't even exist for another hundred years so it doesn't really make sense. The ESRB is squished and both that and the Ubisoft logo are way too close to the edge down there.
As for the back it's a bit more well done, however the "Unite" text is stretched and feels kinda randomly thrown in there especially when there's already a headline above it. The summary text has a couple typos and is spaced terribly. Left justify the paragraph and fix the widow at the end. Make sure the screens reach the other side of the box and raise the screenshots and type and cover up the bottom of Arno so he isn't just floating in midair and so it doesn't come so close to the information on the bottom.
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There's a nice color scheme that flows throughout the box but Arno on the front has a completely different lighting situation than his background and doesn't look right compared to the rest of the box. Add some lighting elements around him in the foreground or something. The logo looks really weird with the symbol being so big next to the text, I would fade the logo behind the text and make the text centered and bigger or ditch the symbol all together and make the text bigger. I would find a different background too for the front because blimps like that didn't even exist for another hundred years so it doesn't really make sense. The ESRB is squished and both that and the Ubisoft logo are way too close to the edge down there.
As for the back it's a bit more well done, however the "Unite" text is stretched and feels kinda randomly thrown in there especially when there's already a headline above it. The summary text has a couple typos and is spaced terribly. Left justify the paragraph and fix the widow at the end. Make sure the screens reach the other side of the box and raise the screenshots and type and cover up the bottom of Arno so he isn't just floating in midair and so it doesn't come so close to the information on the bottom.
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