Will fav for the effort and I quite like the colours.
Viewing in full size I have a few issues however. All the "features" are not really features of the game. I would hope all games now are HD, "Adventure game"... not a feature. "Available on PS"... again not a feature. Features would list like DLC, or different weapon packs etc...
Also there seem to be quite a few broken words. Or words going onto the next line mid way. I would make sure if a word starts on one line it finishes on that same line.
Lastly if you used a Sans Serif font for your body copy, then it would look much neater.
+FaV for effort.
Keep it up..
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Thanks I will try to keep it up.
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Will fav for the effort and I quite like the colours.
Viewing in full size I have a few issues however. All the "features" are not really features of the game. I would hope all games now are HD, "Adventure game"... not a feature. "Available on PS"... again not a feature. Features would list like DLC, or different weapon packs etc...
Also there seem to be quite a few broken words. Or words going onto the next line mid way. I would make sure if a word starts on one line it finishes on that same line.
Lastly if you used a Sans Serif font for your body copy, then it would look much neater.
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Thanks teacher I must do it on my next work
Thanks for comment.
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not bad
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Thanks.
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