This is probably your best work so far (and not just because it's Tomb Raider). The front is good, though Lara doesn't seem... red enough to blend in with everything. Maybe it's the lighting on the render. The blood on the logo is kinda ugly and makes it difficult to read, I'd remove that.
As for the back, the visual effects on the wallpaper are nice, though it is just a wallpaper. The text should be a part of a more exciting or fitting structure in my opinion, as right now it just looks slapped onto the cover. The font isn't very fitting, either. Once again I think you should remove the blood on the text, or at least make it a little opaque. Finally, I think that "I SHALL RISE" is unnecessary, as you only need one tagline.
Dippy dapper, Really nice front man, much better than your first go.
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thank you, My first go was very empty on the front.
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So Nice. I Agree With Vince And You Are Improving Dude.
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thank you
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This is probably your best work so far (and not just because it's Tomb Raider). The front is good, though Lara doesn't seem... red enough to blend in with everything. Maybe it's the lighting on the render. The blood on the logo is kinda ugly and makes it difficult to read, I'd remove that.
As for the back, the visual effects on the wallpaper are nice, though it is just a wallpaper. The text should be a part of a more exciting or fitting structure in my opinion, as right now it just looks slapped onto the cover. The font isn't very fitting, either. Once again I think you should remove the blood on the text, or at least make it a little opaque. Finally, I think that "I SHALL RISE" is unnecessary, as you only need one tagline.
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thank you, i will be working on the back again and see what i can come up with thanx for the advice
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