I think the lighting could use some work. Vin Diesel kind of looks out of place in comparison to all the heavily contrasted characters. He needs some rework. As for the back, I like what you did with the screenshots. Nice little experimentation there. I don't mind the typeface you used, but the text is a little too bold for my taste and a little bigger than necessary. You also need to fix the rivers of the text. It creates a weird negative space more so on the right of the paragraph. I'm sure it'll fix itself if you decrease the type size by 1-2 pts.
Not bad. Some things could be improved though. Instead of having everyones name on top of the front, I'd just leave it blank and put 'Diesel' above the 'xXx' logo. Also, the contrast is very high and almost blinding. The front seems overcrowded and you don't need to have that many people on the front.
The back is pretty good. I'd take the texture off of headline since its making it harder to read. I think that you should only need the bottom screenshots and the top should be removed.
dank je wel
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Nice job as always . . .
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ty matin ;)
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I like Deepika Padukone on front (girl with the gun)
Nice work
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ty bro ;)
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really awesome job
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tnx ;)
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I think the lighting could use some work. Vin Diesel kind of looks out of place in comparison to all the heavily contrasted characters. He needs some rework. As for the back, I like what you did with the screenshots. Nice little experimentation there. I don't mind the typeface you used, but the text is a little too bold for my taste and a little bigger than necessary. You also need to fix the rivers of the text. It creates a weird negative space more so on the right of the paragraph. I'm sure it'll fix itself if you decrease the type size by 1-2 pts.
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agree to lucidhalos
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ty lucid and pogo , update cover
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It's fine now
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@pogo ty ;)
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Ignore my PM. Anyway, this looks a lot better. Nice update.
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no ignore sis , i change back text and light front in render . ty for feedback always ;)
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nice work
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ty ;)
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Congrats man
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ty bro ;)
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Not bad. Some things could be improved though. Instead of having everyones name on top of the front, I'd just leave it blank and put 'Diesel' above the 'xXx' logo. Also, the contrast is very high and almost blinding. The front seems overcrowded and you don't need to have that many people on the front.
The back is pretty good. I'd take the texture off of headline since its making it harder to read. I think that you should only need the bottom screenshots and the top should be removed.
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Congrats bro . . .
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ty matin ;)
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