hmmm... not good... why? well the title is very choppy. make sure after you cut it to check it behind different backgrounds before putting it in your picture, this will save you a lot of time if your a begginner at cutting things out. Also with the title, try making it bigger, and toggling the sizes and what-not. Secondly, try adding some type of effect on the picture, rather than just sticking it in there out of the blue, yours looks a little too plain. Thirdly, in your case, the place where you put your title is in a busy spot (lots of things going on) on your picture, so at first, it didnt look like you had a title. Try moving the title more towards the center where there is less going on. Fourthy, the dev logos (the sony, esrb, and factor logos at the bottom) have stuff wrong with them. The esrb should be the national standard esrb rating logo (like 'Rated T' or whatever), the circle esrb doesn't fit in the box very well, and looks out of place. The sony logo should be the most recent logo you can find (this is a brand new/unreleased game) because that logo is just a bit outdated, and not cut at all to add (if you cant find the current logo, try going on sony.com). Ok, lastly, the backround is way to big and busy, which makes you box seem small and hard to look at carefully. Either have a plain black to white gradient, reduce the size of your current one, or don't have a background at all! Also to add, definetly increase the size of the actual box so it is easier to read. Thanks a lot for reading my horribly long post, I hope I didnt imply that your box is horrible, because it's not, it's quite good for a begginner! :D so if you change your box to my suggestions, I'll rate it then, so keep at it box-artist in training! :)
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hmmm... not good... why? well the title is very choppy. make sure after you cut it to check it behind different backgrounds before putting it in your picture, this will save you a lot of time if your a begginner at cutting things out. Also with the title, try making it bigger, and toggling the sizes and what-not. Secondly, try adding some type of effect on the picture, rather than just sticking it in there out of the blue, yours looks a little too plain. Thirdly, in your case, the place where you put your title is in a busy spot (lots of things going on) on your picture, so at first, it didnt look like you had a title. Try moving the title more towards the center where there is less going on. Fourthy, the dev logos (the sony, esrb, and factor logos at the bottom) have stuff wrong with them. The esrb should be the national standard esrb rating logo (like 'Rated T' or whatever), the circle esrb doesn't fit in the box very well, and looks out of place. The sony logo should be the most recent logo you can find (this is a brand new/unreleased game) because that logo is just a bit outdated, and not cut at all to add (if you cant find the current logo, try going on sony.com). Ok, lastly, the backround is way to big and busy, which makes you box seem small and hard to look at carefully. Either have a plain black to white gradient, reduce the size of your current one, or don't have a background at all! Also to add, definetly increase the size of the actual box so it is easier to read. Thanks a lot for reading my horribly long post, I hope I didnt imply that your box is horrible, because it's not, it's quite good for a begginner! :D so if you change your box to my suggestions, I'll rate it then, so keep at it box-artist in training! :)
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#2, lineage+lair=linear.
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