[ Box updated on October 14th, 2007 ] [ original ]
Kingdom Hearts II Box Cover Comments
Comment on samozamo's Kingdom Hearts II Box Art / Cover.
[ Box updated on October 14th, 2007 ] [ original ]
Comment on samozamo's Kingdom Hearts II Box Art / Cover.
Great job. But where's the summary text?
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Yeah, where's the summary :) Add it and i'll propably fave it.
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it's decent. i don't like the image you chose for the front, and the logo looks small and squashed in that corner. the 12+ on the front should be white. there should be a description on the back, and some of the pics you used are from the first Kingdom Hearts. Also, "the fight has just started" looks kinda random up there. but it's good, the template looks great. there's a 5/5 box hiding inside, but it isn't showing itself completely yet.
3.5/5, it's a good start
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thanks for the comments and i will edit it abit. When i was making the back i was trying to think of something to write for the summary bit but i couldn't think of anything.
oh yea which ones are from kh1?
the main one is on the bk but what others are?
where do u suggest putting the logo?
Edited at 1 decade ago
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#4, look at the pics of sora. you'll notice in some of them he looks younger and wears different clothes (red shorts, blue/white shirt) which is how he appears in KH1, and the older Sora (from KH2) wears black.
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UPDATED the box now.
iv changed the 12+ PEGI to white
iv added different pictures so they are kh2 ones
iv added a summary
and iv moved and enlarged the logo
Edited at 1 decade ago
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much better. 4.5/5
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#7 Woo! thanks
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good box technical wise, but your grammer needs work on the back. try reading what you write out loud to yourself next time.
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yea really sorry about the writing :(,, im very poor when it comes down to english. if somebody could help me that i would give credit or something.
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sorry I would help but I don't know much about the Kingdom Hearts property.
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yea samozamo don't feel bad, doing the writing on the back of the box is probably the hardest part. I recently did one and it took me an hour to figure out what I was going to put.
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lol yea its really hard to think of something to put. hopefully tho my next box will have a better summary.
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#13, i always check the official box for my summaries ;)
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tothegame.com is a good resource for summaries.
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kk this is hopefully the final version,, instead of my made up summary i just used the official one of the actual box.
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The update is so much nicer. Great job.
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