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Kingdom Hearts: Lost Soul Box Cover Comments
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..my first box..i mean it was made yesterday...and im new here...[Riux and Aura r the two main ppl in my KH: Lost Soul...]
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I'm sorry, but even for a first box this is complete crap...
Cut logos out.
Get a better ESRB.
Ask someone in the forums to make a "Lost Soul" logo.
Get a picture that fits the template.
Get a good quality picture.
Add an ESRB on the back.
Use a better picture for the back.
Add a description.
Place screenshots in better places.
Use borders for screeshots.
Get better editing.
I think you might be a spammer but I'm not sure. Either way, Nothing/5
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blurry
white
hard to read
bad logos
bad pics
sorry 1/5
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#3..thnx foreing more polite than #2...i will work on it...im not even familiar with workin with things like this...[i had to use paint...and im lazy t make it perfect...]..#2...im not a spammer..i just joined today...ur eing an ass...ill make it better when i can!!
Edited at 1 decade ago
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#2, read my new comment
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my first box was crap. my second was crap, everyone is crap based on people's opinions. so your probably going to get better than me.
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Don't feel bad.
I'm an advent KH fan too and i can see the effort but it doesn't really pay off because, well, you're using paint.
Oh and twisted tinker toy, you may think your helping by pointing out all the flaws, but when you point them out without suggesting what they could do better you sound like a complete ass.
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#6, thnx!
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#7, thnx
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#4, Look, "I'm too lazy too make it perfect" isn't saying anything good for yourself. I thought you might be a spammer because there are so many now. I'm sorry if I sounded rude but you can never be too careful. I'm still going to have to go with a 1/5.
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I agree with #10.
Sorry, 1/5.
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0.5 /10
bad quality
bad logos
nothing good to be honest sorry
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I really don't think adding your own hair was a good idea. Good attempt for a first.
1/10
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oh and if Aura and Riux are your main characters I think you should show more of them and little less of Sora... maybe a disney/final fantasy character or two would be good to. :)
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Erm... I don't know what to say. Get something like GIMP or Photoshop, don't use MS Paint. 0.5/5, it looks really bad, sorry.
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#14, you are tottaly correct, i made the box kinda in a rush, and i havent been on vgboxart in a while...but i have started on a new box that has less sora and better pictures of aura and riux.
#15, I had photoshop, except i had to uninstall it for awhile but i got newer version now so I can do much better
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Ok.. im not Gonna be a total jerk be cause my boxes aren't that good either...
But first of all...
You have to make sure theres no white Crap around any renders/Pictures
No adding your own, Hair, it just looks straight up gay (NO OFFENSE)
So next time you make a box, don't rush...
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#17, thanks for the constructive critiscism, my new box will probably have recolors, but not of cgi pictures. I am also including a background more like a normal kingdom hearts game, and like I said, now that Photoshop is working I can not have pixilated white crap all over the images and logos.
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No offence, but even for a first box, this is horrible. Make a real front, get better screenshots for the back, and make a description. Also don,t use Paint.
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So gay that you should die for making it
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#20, I wouldn't say that. You can say it's bad or want needs to be improved. But, never say "It sucks" or anything like that...unless you want banned.
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