This is only my first box! Please feel free to comment it... whether you like it or not. If you dont like it, please give some tips how i can improve it =]
well,
-youve been using paint, paint doesnt make good boxes.
-very creative, i like the way you put the characters in different shapes
-the template seems bad. why dont you get some here link
-you cut out the logos very well. no one ive ever seen has cut out logos well on their first box!
-the wifi logo is bad. try and get a different one here link
- you should try using a background. google up wallpapers and find one that you like.
i like it, the creativity makes it good, even though there are some major flaws
3.7/5
#3, I'm pretty sure I cut the logos out well on my first. And actually, I think the logos are cut very well. The white is still in the center of the title, the Nintendo logo has some white spots and the ESRB, it's, actually, okay! It's a good first. Very creative and I didn't mean to sound harsh at all or anything (aimed at what I said above).
#5 Thanks for your comment.
I know some of my logos could be cut better, i hope to make this better for my 2nd attempt at a box. Thanks for everything else you said =]
I dislike how the characters are in shapes and the way the background looks. I would look at other peoples boxes or official boxes to get a good idea what to do with boxes.
#7 Why should i need to copy other people's boxes or official boxes? Whats wrong with thinking up my own idea rather than be *Boring* and just have the usual characters in the background and then other characters in little rectangles down the side?
I said you should use the idea. This shows hardly no characters. It shows them all in different sizes in screen shots. There placed in random areas. Nothing about this is very official looking. The background doesn't make much sense. I didn't say copy i said look at other boxes for good ideas....so dont put words in my mouth.
#11 maybe i dont wanna look at other boxes for ideas like you do.
Maybe i want to come up with my OWN ideas? Ever heard of a little something called originality?
i havent seen his latest stuff....
but this wasn't great for a first box to be fair.
but seeming as apparently he has improved i dont need to giv ehim advice hes prob better than me ive only done 2 boxes...
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This is only my first box! Please feel free to comment it... whether you like it or not. If you dont like it, please give some tips how i can improve it =]
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well,
-youve been using paint, paint doesnt make good boxes.
-very creative, i like the way you put the characters in different shapes
-the template seems bad. why dont you get some here link
-you cut out the logos very well. no one ive ever seen has cut out logos well on their first box!
-the wifi logo is bad. try and get a different one here link
- you should try using a background. google up wallpapers and find one that you like.
i like it, the creativity makes it good, even though there are some major flaws
3.7/5
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#3 Thank you for your comment.
I appreciate your advice and i will take all of what you said into account when starting on my 2nd box =]
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#3, I'm pretty sure I cut the logos out well on my first. And actually, I think the logos are cut very well. The white is still in the center of the title, the Nintendo logo has some white spots and the ESRB, it's, actually, okay! It's a good first. Very creative and I didn't mean to sound harsh at all or anything (aimed at what I said above).
Welcome to VGBA!
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#5 Thanks for your comment.
I know some of my logos could be cut better, i hope to make this better for my 2nd attempt at a box. Thanks for everything else you said =]
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I dislike how the characters are in shapes and the way the background looks. I would look at other peoples boxes or official boxes to get a good idea what to do with boxes.
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#7 Why should i need to copy other people's boxes or official boxes? Whats wrong with thinking up my own idea rather than be *Boring* and just have the usual characters in the background and then other characters in little rectangles down the side?
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its good for a first, but i dont like the way you formattted it.
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#9 can you please explain this further?
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I said you should use the idea. This shows hardly no characters. It shows them all in different sizes in screen shots. There placed in random areas. Nothing about this is very official looking. The background doesn't make much sense. I didn't say copy i said look at other boxes for good ideas....so dont put words in my mouth.
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#11 maybe i dont wanna look at other boxes for ideas like you do.
Maybe i want to come up with my OWN ideas? Ever heard of a little something called originality?
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its hard to be original when the year is 2008
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#13 Well i think my box is original compared to the other SSBB boxes on this site. Im not saying its good... but original =/
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an update would be OK
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whoah, so this is ceriums first box, wow, you've come a long way mate.
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Wow, Cerium sure has improved.
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#17, No he hasn't.
/joke
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i know
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i havent seen his latest stuff....
but this wasn't great for a first box to be fair.
but seeming as apparently he has improved i dont need to giv ehim advice hes prob better than me ive only done 2 boxes...
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#20 Um.....
Go check out my latest boxes? =]
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why do u only show those characters? next time show all of the main characters. the template isnt very good either
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how the hell did you get all that time since last year to improve so much?
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oh you have improved so much young one!!
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i know this is old but did you use powerpoint for this?
just asking -____-
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