i like the screenshots, but they aren't organized and sonic should not be floating, that isn't good, and you need a better logo go on sonicresearch.org/art to get good pics!
Where do I start?
1. screens go over template
2. Logo is awful
3. Sonic is running in air
4. Boring BG Sonic is running on
5. Back could use a better BG
6. Screenshots are different sizes
7. Font is bad
8. Text hard to read
9. Back ESRB is unporportional
10. Blurry
Sorry, not too good. Fix those things and you'll be set! =D
The Bad:
- Sonic walks through the air
- "Unleashed" looks cheap
- The back font is horrible
- That moon behind him is unsharp
- Where is: Licensed by Nintendo
- The text on the back doesn't make any sense
Overall, pretty bad.
Back: 6/20
Front: 10/40
Idea: 3/15
Authenticity: 3/15
Stuff: 7/10
With "Stuff" I mean ESRB or PEGI logo, publisher etc.
Overall: 29 out of 100 "Terrible"
#5 What do you mean this is a 'nice idea'
Someone posted on the forum about a new Sonic game and this guy just used the idea and rushed this peice of turd because he was so desperate to be the first one to make a box for this game. I knew it wouldnt be long before some gave it a try!
Anyway that back description is amongst the worst back descriptions I have ever seen on this site!
#9 Then why did you rush this box and even boasted about making it in 30 minutes?
Take time on your boxes in future and everyone will be happier! Including yourself.
#14, oh great, now he's running on water, go on the site that i told you about on comment #3 and get some good pics to fit that! then i'll probably fave it!
Sorry, I went to the wrong site. Anyway, I need Backgrounds. and #18, I might do that (sarcastic). I mean, There are no decent backgrounds anymore. how about I leave The Water, But use a Jumping Pic?
#20, Really?
#21 - 22, I knew I forgot something!
Cerium, would you mind telling me how to fix it up? I know It is the weirdest box on the site, but would you mind? Hypershadow2008, would you help?
To be honest, the update looks alot worse!
I mean running in space was pretty stupid but now he's running on water?
Geez why not just make him run on hot coal next? >.<
#33, ok.
#28, I think that Was Someone else, or maybe a hacker. Because I just found out That Him and I are In the same class, and he says some cool stuff about my boxes.
Hey I just did this so, whatever.
#3, thanks.
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#1, Ah, that's the first rule of commenting on your own box, you don't tell how long it took unless it took longer than 5 hours.
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i like the screenshots, but they aren't organized and sonic should not be floating, that isn't good, and you need a better logo go on sonicresearch.org/art to get good pics!
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Where do I start?
1. screens go over template
2. Logo is awful
3. Sonic is running in air
4. Boring BG Sonic is running on
5. Back could use a better BG
6. Screenshots are different sizes
7. Font is bad
8. Text hard to read
9. Back ESRB is unporportional
10. Blurry
Sorry, not too good. Fix those things and you'll be set! =D
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The Good:
- Sonic is well cut out
- Nice idea
The Bad:
- Sonic walks through the air
- "Unleashed" looks cheap
- The back font is horrible
- That moon behind him is unsharp
- Where is: Licensed by Nintendo
- The text on the back doesn't make any sense
Overall, pretty bad.
Back: 6/20
Front: 10/40
Idea: 3/15
Authenticity: 3/15
Stuff: 7/10
With "Stuff" I mean ESRB or PEGI logo, publisher etc.
Overall: 29 out of 100 "Terrible"
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#1, nicely changed from "Hey I just whipped this up in 30 minutes. so, whatever." to "Hey I just did this so, whatever."
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#5 What do you mean this is a 'nice idea'
Someone posted on the forum about a new Sonic game and this guy just used the idea and rushed this peice of turd because he was so desperate to be the first one to make a box for this game. I knew it wouldnt be long before some gave it a try!
Anyway that back description is amongst the worst back descriptions I have ever seen on this site!
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#6, that's not cool. You should edit that. It's not fair to not let him 'try' to redeme himself by editing if you are gonna reviel it to everyone.
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#7, actually, I did not want to be the first one on the site to make this box.
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#9 Then why did you rush this box and even boasted about making it in 30 minutes?
Take time on your boxes in future and everyone will be happier! Including yourself.
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#10, whatever.
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#11 If thats your attitude when people are trying to help ya then you aren't gonna get very far on this site =/
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#4, what he said, and i mean, come on, these screenshots just came out today and just look how you put shame to them so quickly....
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well this box ain't going, and #12, I am sorry I disrespected you.
EDIT: I updated
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#14, oh great, now he's running on water, go on the site that i told you about on comment #3 and get some good pics to fit that! then i'll probably fave it!
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#15, I need an account!
Sorry, I went to the wrong site. Anyway, I need Backgrounds. and #18, I might do that (sarcastic). I mean, There are no decent backgrounds anymore. how about I leave The Water, But use a Jumping Pic?
#20, Really?
#21 - 22, I knew I forgot something!
Cerium, would you mind telling me how to fix it up? I know It is the weirdest box on the site, but would you mind? Hypershadow2008, would you help?
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#16, what?
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To be honest, the update looks alot worse!
I mean running in space was pretty stupid but now he's running on water?
Geez why not just make him run on hot coal next? >.<
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#18, lol!!!!
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Hey! The lightning actually looks cool :D
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You've updated it, and it looks much better, but now you have to change the back!
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Yes the front is better.... the back still looks awful.
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#22, that is basicly what i just said! ;)
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anyone else have constructive criticism? anyone?
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#24, i do.this is your worst work
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#25, oh shut the fuck up (pardon my bad language), he said constructive!
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my last comment wasn't anything bad about the box, it was just deleted!
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Hypershadow are you eight or something? Telling people to "shut the fuck up" is not on.
Also in general there needs to be less of these bumping, unconstructive comments.
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#28, i know, i've just had a bad day. sorry sonic_the_hedgehog!
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#16, Okay if you need backgrounds, look in www.sonicstyle.org
that place has tons of cool stuff.
go to Official artwork > ripped artwork then try numerous games and youll find cool stuff. hope that helps.
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#30, i can't work that site out!!!
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#29, I don't think that was the hog. He
is usually nicer.
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#32, mebe, pm me on how you are doin' with the pic okay mousepad.
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#33, ok.
#28, I think that Was Someone else, or maybe a hacker. Because I just found out That Him and I are In the same class, and he says some cool stuff about my boxes.
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#25, Forgive, But How? How does It suck? and If You are going to be like that, don't comment.
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#35, I don't like it very much
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#36, what about the pic on the back?
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#37, No. Not relly
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#38, cough*four spoons adventure belongs in HOF*cough
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#29, Its ok.And just call meh Sonic
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#39, *cough* no it doesnt *cough*
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#41, I think so,
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It's Aliright but the back is BAD 2/5
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