I've been working on this box since the moment after I finished my Fallout 3 box. I still don't think the back came out that good, but whatever. Please view in full and tell me what you think.
#2, Thanks. I might rework the back a little. It's really only the description that I'm having troubles with so it shouldn't be too hard for me to fix up. I just have to find the right layout.
I love the front a lot. I like the screens and screen borders on the back a well. What i don't like is the text. There is not enough and it is way too big. Change the text and you got my fav'. 3.7/5
The front looks good, but it bothers me that you have Kim/Dom and that Baird/Cole are absent.
The General RAMM plot line reveal should be dropped because that wasn't there goal at all until the very last chapter.
Some of the bullet details should be worked around to make it seem more like either A. A port of Gears PC to the Wii. or B. A Gears PC port that was released after Gears 2.
Also, throw a Classic Controller & GameCube Controller compatiblity icon onto the back cover.
its a nice idea but it will never go to the wii because the physics engine and graphics on the wii are poorer than the N64 it has a higher chance to be on the ps3 nice box though good finish but like what mcnichoi said wheres baird and cole
I'm going to rework the back alot, I don't have any of mysuper-cool fonts so it might be tough, but I think I should remove RAAM and use a different summary, what do you think?
aw, i'm at 53 points and I kno nobody else cares, but it seems to me that this is my best chance at a Hall of Fame. I absolutely hate having to do this but, please, more ppl check out this box. :(
#25, Thanks. I don't really have a lot of options with text due to my ongoing computer troubles. Also, I'm adding a soundtrack to this box and making it a bundle. I'll probably add more as I go along, it's just that I want a HOF so badly and this box isn't getting enough attention :(
Dude...you're going about this all wrong. You don't get a Hall because you bump and constantly keep track of points, you get a Hall by laying back and letting people fav the box for what it is, not what the Author is doing to promote it. So please, quit it with the comments after every single post someone makes. If it gets into the Hall by itself, great, if not, then where would the satisfaction come from?
EDIT: I just saw the message you sent me on my profile. That makes it all the more worse.
#31, Nobody gives a shit about it though! You honestly think that half the people that faved would have even looked at this if I hadn't of mentioned it? I'll stop, but so far, this method has worked out pretty well for people like afifian and a-beast-of-art.
@Karma ~ I'm sorry for everything I said. You were just stating the rules after all. I very well might still leave the site, but I at least needed to apologize. Im not asking you to forgive me, I just want you to know that I'm sorry.
Anyway, I added a new back. I hope the text stands out a little more now. :)
Not really that good, to be honest. Everything's together, but it just feels so copy and paste. With Gears, I want the box to feel more like a seamless piece of art. Plus, I don't really like Wii Edition in the title, just feels weird. I know they did it on Resident Evil 4 for Wii, and I didn't like that either.
I don't mind the use of a red Wi-Fi logo, but I would make it somewhat smaller.
Yeah, this isn't very good, and IMO, still far from earning a spot in the HoF. Firstly, for the front and back, the shadow for the text and logo is too strong. Also, on the front, you should put all the soldiers, then it would look right.
There, it's back to the way it was...and I did try adding the soldiers but I couldn't even if I wanted to. I don't have the front saved as a .pdn file so I and without the jacinto font, I won't be able to remake the logo. If someone recreates the logo, I'll be happy to edit the front. :)
Alright, so I updated it...again. I tweaked the front a little bit (thanks to Drakxxx for his awesome logo :) )
#47, I thought it looked pretty good in the middle though...
Fine, I'll move the logo up, just give me a second. And I trid addng Baird and Cole and my attempts at adding them behind Marcus, Dom and Kim....failed miserably...
I've been working on this box since the moment after I finished my Fallout 3 box. I still don't think the back came out that good, but whatever. Please view in full and tell me what you think.
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I really like the front but the back needs some more work. It's still good enough for a fav from me.
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#2, Thanks. I might rework the back a little. It's really only the description that I'm having troubles with so it shouldn't be too hard for me to fix up. I just have to find the right layout.
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awsome. I wish it were really for wii( i'd buy it)5/5
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#6, 6th post, 6th fav lol
You know what? I'm going to work on this for a little while. After all, it seems to be my best box. Any suggestions?
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6. ;) lol.
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Alrght, text on back should be easier to read now. I also threw in a pic of RAAM. I wanted to put him in before but I couldn't find a render of him.
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I love the front a lot. I like the screens and screen borders on the back a well. What i don't like is the text. There is not enough and it is way too big. Change the text and you got my fav'. 3.7/5
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Alright, any suggestions?
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#8, There you go...lots of text to read.
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That's hot, I like how it doesn't have the red color theme to it.
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The front looks good, but it bothers me that you have Kim/Dom and that Baird/Cole are absent.
The General RAMM plot line reveal should be dropped because that wasn't there goal at all until the very last chapter.
Some of the bullet details should be worked around to make it seem more like either A. A port of Gears PC to the Wii. or B. A Gears PC port that was released after Gears 2.
Also, throw a Classic Controller & GameCube Controller compatiblity icon onto the back cover.
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its a nice idea but it will never go to the wii because the physics engine and graphics on the wii are poorer than the N64 it has a higher chance to be on the ps3 nice box though good finish but like what mcnichoi said wheres baird and cole
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#13, baird and cole would crowd the box WAY too much. Hell, it's already crowded enough with the Brumak, Dom, Marcus and Kim...
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Looks pretty good man. :) A bit washed out, but you got everything placed good, and I like the layout.
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really good, but i think that the front looks a little fat. lol.
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I'm going to rework the back alot, I don't have any of mysuper-cool fonts so it might be tough, but I think I should remove RAAM and use a different summary, what do you think?
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looks nice man, fav :)
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I updated the back, I think it looks better now, enjoy!
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pretty noice!!!
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aw, i'm at 53 points and I kno nobody else cares, but it seems to me that this is my best chance at a Hall of Fame. I absolutely hate having to do this but, please, more ppl check out this box. :(
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You know all in all this box aint half bad.
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#21, It could possibly get in the Hall if it got more attention.
I like how the screen shots are. =)
I'm faving.
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#22 & #23 ~ Thanks :)
(59 pts) only 91 pts left. :)
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it's really good, i just think yuo can experiment a bit more with the text
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#25, Thanks. I don't really have a lot of options with text due to my ongoing computer troubles. Also, I'm adding a soundtrack to this box and making it a bundle. I'll probably add more as I go along, it's just that I want a HOF so badly and this box isn't getting enough attention :(
(66 pts) 84 pts.
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Its okay.
I could use with some improvment, but its fine.
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#27, Improvement like......?
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#28, The text on the back could use some help. add a drop shadow or something.+fav
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#29, Drop shadow? What's that?
(74 pts) 76 pts to go; I'm pretty much halfway there :)
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Dude...you're going about this all wrong. You don't get a Hall because you bump and constantly keep track of points, you get a Hall by laying back and letting people fav the box for what it is, not what the Author is doing to promote it. So please, quit it with the comments after every single post someone makes. If it gets into the Hall by itself, great, if not, then where would the satisfaction come from?
EDIT: I just saw the message you sent me on my profile. That makes it all the more worse.
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#31, Nobody gives a shit about it though! You honestly think that half the people that faved would have even looked at this if I hadn't of mentioned it? I'll stop, but so far, this method has worked out pretty well for people like afifian and a-beast-of-art.
and btw, it has 80 pts :p lol
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i think that if can get the text to pop out more than you'll get more favs. right now it's pretty much just the text that's holding you back. :)
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Commented because asked to in PM.
Oh, and it still needs 57 points, thats not "close"
Please stop sending people messages telling them to look.
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@Karma ~ I'm sorry for everything I said. You were just stating the rules after all. I very well might still leave the site, but I at least needed to apologize. Im not asking you to forgive me, I just want you to know that I'm sorry.
Anyway, I added a new back. I hope the text stands out a little more now. :)
#34, I already said I'd stop that.
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add a black drop shadow to the text and you're good to go. :)
and i still implore you not leave. :)
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#35, It's okay dude, there's nothing to apologize for. Hell, if you need any help on the box, I'll be glad to give it :)
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Credits to gamerking who helped me with the drop shadow :)
It should be just about as good as I can do anything about now. :) Enjoy!
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Not really that good, to be honest. Everything's together, but it just feels so copy and paste. With Gears, I want the box to feel more like a seamless piece of art. Plus, I don't really like Wii Edition in the title, just feels weird. I know they did it on Resident Evil 4 for Wii, and I didn't like that either.
I don't mind the use of a red Wi-Fi logo, but I would make it somewhat smaller.
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Its blurry..
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#40, Is it better now?
#43, Airwalker said it looked too blurry. I'll fix it, give me a second...
#42, It would look too crowded though....I'll try, but I'm not so sure it would work...
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Yeah, this isn't very good, and IMO, still far from earning a spot in the HoF. Firstly, for the front and back, the shadow for the text and logo is too strong. Also, on the front, you should put all the soldiers, then it would look right.
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yeah, what did you for your latest update, tyler? the shadow was just fine on version 6.
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There, it's back to the way it was...and I did try adding the soldiers but I couldn't even if I wanted to. I don't have the front saved as a .pdn file so I and without the jacinto font, I won't be able to remake the logo. If someone recreates the logo, I'll be happy to edit the front. :)
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I actually like it. really good job!
4.5/5 and faved!
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#45, Thanks.
Alright, so I updated it...again. I tweaked the front a little bit (thanks to Drakxxx for his awesome logo :) )
#47, I thought it looked pretty good in the middle though...
Fine, I'll move the logo up, just give me a second. And I trid addng Baird and Cole and my attempts at adding them behind Marcus, Dom and Kim....failed miserably...
Alright, logo has been moved up.
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Looks loads better just move the logo up more
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yeah. defiantly ALOT better, but it could use cole and baird. and move the logo up. :)
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I don't like it, imo, but I see that you've tried your best, and put maxium effort in, by updating frequently, which is why I will fav.
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thanks.....I think...could you tell my why you don't like it or what you don't like about it? Maybe I could fix it.
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Holly macaroni!
10 versions!
Sooooo much effort! _0_ greatness! =P
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Not my cup of tea, sorry.
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What is so great about this? It doesn't deserve the "Haul". All the color is washed out, the back is lackluster, etc.
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I was expecting some rubbish piece of trash, but if gears was on Wii I would imagine the box would be exactly like this. 5/5
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#54, OMG! *dies of laughter*
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