It isn't that bad, but I'd suggest using a gradient rather than a solid color, like maybe fading from black to the red color scheme, that way you prevent some of the characters from looking like they're floating. Since of course, Big Smoke is in all senses of the work, floating.
credit to techne for template
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NNNIIIICEEEE
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i don't lke the green color scheem 4/5, try red or blue
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updated red scheme
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It isn't that bad, but I'd suggest using a gradient rather than a solid color, like maybe fading from black to the red color scheme, that way you prevent some of the characters from looking like they're floating. Since of course, Big Smoke is in all senses of the work, floating.
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ok better than mine
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