Hey guys, Vivi here, well I wanted to make a box for one of my favorite games of 08 and point blank time lol. Valkyria Chronicles was based on war obviously and I implemented the friendship aspects and the briefing war, so the actual cover is the briefing before you go to war XD
I like it overall, but i don't like how the woman on the front is very contrasted, there is no description, the tagline doesn't seem to stand out (probably because of the skinny font), 2 characters on the back are there twice, and there isnt any blending between images on the spine.
#7, Well, okay. Sorry for not doing this earlier Vivi.
Here's my diagnosis, it's all really based on opinion :
- The tagline on the back doesn't really pop out....at all. Your a vet and a better boxartist, So I don't think it's my place to tell you how to make a box better, but I'd outline the tagline a bit more.
- The back consists of screenshots and small descriptions, no main description to tell us about the game. It's not required, but a main description sure is an added bonus.
- I don't the like the font you used on the back, it's kinda boring IMO.
But the front is really awesome, great work on that.
wow, really really good
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Hey guys, Vivi here, well I wanted to make a box for one of my favorite games of 08 and point blank time lol. Valkyria Chronicles was based on war obviously and I implemented the friendship aspects and the briefing war, so the actual cover is the briefing before you go to war XD
Anyways hope you guys enjoy :D
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OH sweetness. Excellent work here.
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Great work mate. Could have done with a description/story text block on back, but apart from that, nice one mate. :)
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I love this game and I just beat it a few weeks ago.
Great box btw. And excellent presentation too may I add. ;)
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It's a good box, but I don't really find it that appealing. Sorry.
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#6, Ok...you're welcome to say that, but how is that comment helpful? If you think there's something to improve upon, give some C&C.
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Im glad that i was able to find this under all the...not so good sonic and pokemon boxes everywhere. Great work!
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I like it overall, but i don't like how the woman on the front is very contrasted, there is no description, the tagline doesn't seem to stand out (probably because of the skinny font), 2 characters on the back are there twice, and there isnt any blending between images on the spine.
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I think it's awesome! (A)
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#7, Well, okay. Sorry for not doing this earlier Vivi.
Here's my diagnosis, it's all really based on opinion :
- The tagline on the back doesn't really pop out....at all. Your a vet and a better boxartist, So I don't think it's my place to tell you how to make a box better, but I'd outline the tagline a bit more.
- The back consists of screenshots and small descriptions, no main description to tell us about the game. It's not required, but a main description sure is an added bonus.
- I don't the like the font you used on the back, it's kinda boring IMO.
But the front is really awesome, great work on that.
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Shmank you ladies and gents XD
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This is great
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The tank bothers me a bit ... but thats not like a detail ,, just my opinion
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Nice work.
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I agree with numerobetically here!
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Thats one sexy box :)
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Nice work
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hello this is a very nice art cover can you include a printable? its so good compared to the ones they included for the US cover =). Please&Thankyou!
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looks better that the official one
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Haha thanks everyone! Unfortunatly, I dont have the computer originally with the file for this box, so no printable.
But thanks alot for the comments and wow at the Wasabi comment :D Thanks mate!
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