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Finally! Credit goes to the King for his Templates... also known as Jevan god. I put a hell of a lot of work into this, and I feel as if it payed off... a lot. Comments are welcome. Enjoy. Uploading printable in three... two...
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So jevan's calling himself King now?
The box isn't bad but the bottom of the front doesn't feature in the game and I would like more notice of the werehog. Also try and put a shadow on sonic. 6/10
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#2, Actually, I call him, king, because of his template kingdom.
There is a shadow on Sonic, but it's very faint. Besides, when does any front of any box have to do with events in the game?
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I have a couple of suggestions I left in the WIP on the forums. For your convenience, I'll copy and paste:
It's not jaw-dropping amazing, but it's good. I think Sonic needs a shadow under him (I can't see it, either...)...make a back based on the werehog, and I think you'll have something pretty cool going. Also, I'd like to see Eggman's fleet less transparent.
I think those ideas would make it better.
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I hate critics... as I said before, there is a shadow, but it's very unnoticeable because of the mist.
P.S. Main reason the Werehog isn't on the box much, is because I hate him. Well, actually, it's because It's hard to take a genre such as Sonic, and make it light and appealing to the eye, and dark and grimmy... unless it's Shadow the Hedgehog.
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It's pretty decent, nothing totally outstanding though... 7/10
I got a bit annoyed on the WIP thread with people like Paper Sonic and Lestat leaving comments like "OMGZ INSTANT HOF". It will just leave him even more disappointed if it doesn't reach HoF. Please dont give his hopes up people!
But yeah like I said, nice box. The only complaint I have is that Sonic doesn't look very natural compared to the grass and background surroundings. You can obviously tell he has just been slapped on there. You should edit the colours and lighting and maybe give Sonic a shadow?
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#6, Like I said, if it doesn't get in the hall, then I can try again... unless after a million boxes it doesn't get in :P.
Sonic has a shadow, but, seen as how everybody's commenting on it, I'll make it more visible.
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#7 Remember, if the light is coming from behind Sonic, the shadow should be in front of him =)
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#5, You hate critics? I'm sorry, that was a very unintelligent thing to say. This website is all about getting critiques on your work. I'm trying to actually help.
I'll keep that in mind for the future.
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That's insane.... O______O
*Twitch*
Very nice work! I especially love the work you did with all the features on the back.
Supah-Dupah-Awesome-HughJass-FAVE!!
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#8, I'll keep that in mind.
#9, I was kidding, as in Critics make me work. lol
#10, thanks, but I think your far better than me. Also, are you almost done the back of SSBB?
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#11 He really ain't.
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Holy... wow, dude, I love you!
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Updated.
#13, thank you?
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#13, lol
great box, i really like the front.
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Really nice work! Very sharp and clean, and I love the airy atmosphere on the front of the design.
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Wow, I'm drawing in Rank 9's...
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Hmmm, okay, it's hard to tell if something's a joke over the net sometimes, y'know? So I apologize for jumping the gun on that. The shadow could be a bit softer edged, but that's just a nitpick. Looks better.
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Its really cool.
But no Werehog?
FAV!
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Hehe... thats right gnats, raise my Rank, then I shall smite you all...
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Cerium...Well I'm sorry The Front Is amazing and yes i think it is amazing maybe not Hof but still Wow. the back is just good If you Work on the back it would be Hall worthy. Really it would :)
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Edit: why does he need a shadow I fought he was Running on Water?
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You added a shadow on Sonic which is good but what about the robots in the background?
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Well the fronts good, not so much the back and spine.
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I really don't like this, and I'm not really sure why everyone else did. The game logo on the front really doesn't stand out, and seems to just blend into everything else. Usually Sonic boxes revolve their designs around the game logo. I also don't like the discolored SEGA logo, I would have left that the original. Other than that the front is not too bad. For the back, the tagline should be bigger (or maybe make it more interesting). Also, I feel like there is too much text on the back, and seems like the text in the main focus. The don't like the screenshots you used and I think there should be at least 3 of them (I think that would help the design). Other than that, the back seems pretty interesting.
So for right now, it's not a "+Fav" from me. Fix a couple of those things, then I'll most likely put it into my favorites. :)
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#24, I agree, nice constructive comment.
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