I'm sorry, but i'm going to have to be honest with you.
The box is good, not epically great,but good. There are a few smalle flaws[ off-centre sonic on the front, and text/blending issues on the back], but I personally don't care about them.
My main gripe however, is your presentation. I understand how you like it being original and unique to your own style, but it's really bothering me alot.
Your work could be alot better if your presentation wasn't....this.
I'm sorry if I sound harsh, and believe me, I don't mean to be rude or anything, i'm just trying to help you progress. I don't want to sound rude, if I do; i'm sorry.
I was never a huge fan of this presentation, and you should ensure that that stripe doesn't go over the circular part.. But this is a huge improvement!
I like the box quite a bit. The off center Sonic actually adds a feeling of movement, so it works for me. I don't dig the presentation, but I don't have (or feel the need to give) suggestions on how to make it "better". I fav for the box.
Yeah. Out of the box epicness. I hope.
Please also check the printable.
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Not Bad, I think it would look better if you center Sonic a bit more, But great Job!
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i like :)
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Nice, I like this.
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I'm sorry, but i'm going to have to be honest with you.
The box is good, not epically great,but good. There are a few smalle flaws[ off-centre sonic on the front, and text/blending issues on the back], but I personally don't care about them.
My main gripe however, is your presentation. I understand how you like it being original and unique to your own style, but it's really bothering me alot.
Your work could be alot better if your presentation wasn't....this.
I'm sorry if I sound harsh, and believe me, I don't mean to be rude or anything, i'm just trying to help you progress. I don't want to sound rude, if I do; i'm sorry.
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#5, Don't worry. I have changed my presentation style.
I have adopted a more transparent one.
#8, Thank you!
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FAV
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I was never a huge fan of this presentation, and you should ensure that that stripe doesn't go over the circular part.. But this is a huge improvement!
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I like the box quite a bit. The off center Sonic actually adds a feeling of movement, so it works for me. I don't dig the presentation, but I don't have (or feel the need to give) suggestions on how to make it "better". I fav for the box.
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