Thanx! I tried the font in black but it sunk into the shadows of the leaves and the trunk. Thanx for your tips! Hopefully this will be my rank 4 box if enough people fav ;)
The back is too text heavy and there are quite a few grammar/spelling errors. Also, the red text doesn't work for me. Try using white with the drop shadow/stroke people have been mentioning and try to pull together or edit more screenshots.
It's a cute idea. The execution of the idea is a little weak, though.
The front cover is great! The text on the back should be white with a black dropshadow/stroke and there should be more screenshots. So the front is great, but the back needs work :D
Ok this took a while to make and I would like to credit a dew people;
Tmrd for the userlogo
Paper Sonic for the game logo
And jevan for the temp.
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Pretty cool! I would make the text on the back stand out a bit more with a black stroke or a drop shadow. Fav :)
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Thanx! I tried the font in black but it sunk into the shadows of the leaves and the trunk. Thanx for your tips! Hopefully this will be my rank 4 box if enough people fav ;)
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Also I think Baby Mario is covering some of the text.
#3, Just a black outline on the red text would do I think :)
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I don't like the back, but the front is awesome! Work on the text and screenshots on the back.
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#5, OK thanx, i'll fix that , worth a fav? ;)
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The back is too text heavy and there are quite a few grammar/spelling errors. Also, the red text doesn't work for me. Try using white with the drop shadow/stroke people have been mentioning and try to pull together or edit more screenshots.
It's a cute idea. The execution of the idea is a little weak, though.
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The front cover is great! The text on the back should be white with a black dropshadow/stroke and there should be more screenshots. So the front is great, but the back needs work :D
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#7, If you fix the box then yes.
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#9, I don't want to fix the box, lol.
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I have updated the box, now with a better back with better text and more screenshots. Please fav if you like.
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Hahaha, loving that baby mario xD
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#12, thanx is it better now? Congrats on rank 7!!!
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Looks great now! I will fav, but can you change Baby Mario? It looks like he's floating.
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#14, Thanx, baby marios ot really floating more drowning...
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shadows.
But nice.
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#16, Thanx, havent figured out how to get them closer to the writning yet.. Damn Elements 7, its so damn complicated....
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The front is great!!
but the back needs a little work
the screen shots look like artworks insted of screenshot
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#15 thanx!! I couldn't really find any shots that looked beachy and with yoshi. I ll search again tonight. Thanx!
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