This is a bunch of renders slapped onto a template with nothing but a black background, E10 is coving the logo, and the box is too crowded.
Also, I'm sorry to say but this will probably be on FailBlog soon..
Anyway, I would start from scratch, get a better template (There's 3 in the resource section: link, use the standard logo and just put it on a related background and add some effects to it. Maybe even add some Flickys or something in the background.
Anyway, it does look a lot better now. I like that you added a back -A fairly good one actually-, but I think the text could stand to be a little more exciting. Another thing that could use dome fixing is the spine; the silhouette of Sonic doesn't look very good, and a spine logo is supposed to go there. The screenshots are actually pretty good, but I don't think the game will have Green Hill Zone in it.
Oh well. Overall It isn't a complete eyesore. Just make the text a bit more exciting, and it will be better!
This is a bunch of renders slapped onto a template with nothing but a black background, E10 is coving the logo, and the box is too crowded.
Also, I'm sorry to say but this will probably be on FailBlog soon..
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I'll edit it as soon as i can.
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Happy? I updated it. Personally i prefer the first.
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I don't like version 1 or 2. Both look like you just slapped a render on a blank background with a logo, ESRB, and sega. 1/10
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On your AC/DC design I asked if you would please upload you next box to the WIP thread. I'll ask you again this time: post in the WIP thread first.
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It's low quality, but it's great!
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#6, Thanks!!!!
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Updated, but not as good as the other STH4 boxes
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Ugh it's still really bad link
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#9, You are so damn helpful, you know that!?
Anyway, I would start from scratch, get a better template (There's 3 in the resource section: link, use the standard logo and just put it on a related background and add some effects to it. Maybe even add some Flickys or something in the background.
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#9, youre the one to talk
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#10, thanks. I've been trying to figure out who tho make it look better, I've been making screen shots on paint.(Unfinished)
Unusable sprite picture custom by me:
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Well, I didn't use my screen shots, but its updated.
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#12 Dude, don't use MS Paint!! Thats one of the best tips I can give
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Wow, a tip, that's the first from you on this whole page.
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#15, Don't get used too it.
Anyway, it does look a lot better now. I like that you added a back -A fairly good one actually-, but I think the text could stand to be a little more exciting. Another thing that could use dome fixing is the spine; the silhouette of Sonic doesn't look very good, and a spine logo is supposed to go there. The screenshots are actually pretty good, but I don't think the game will have Green Hill Zone in it.
Oh well. Overall It isn't a complete eyesore. Just make the text a bit more exciting, and it will be better!
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It does have Green Hill Zone as the first world. I read the article in Nintendo Power
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CrashCorndog: On a separate note, don't save sprite work (or dang near anything) in JPEG format. Paint is more than usable for sprites though.
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#17, No, That's Splash Hill Zone.
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Splash Hill Zone:
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Green Hill Zone:
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