Ladies and gentlemen, I present MadWorld II, the sequel to the goriest game on Wii :) thank you to those who helped in the WiP thread. Credit to KoopaDasher for the kick ass logo and to Silent Oblivion for the template.
As the others have said, the template it pretty annoying. And the art... I realize it's a black and white game, but you need SOMETHING. Something to break up all those images. It's painful to look at. Even a bit of red would help. As the others have said, the back text is very difficult to read. Overall, your biggest issue is that you simply have too many image here, making the box far too busy.
Alright I'll edit it more, change the template and change the text on the back. I'll also change the front and have version 2 uploaded when it's done :)
UPDATED! View in full!!! I completely re-designed it and went for a much more simplistic look for the front, much like the first MadWorld's official box art. I cleaned up the back also and made the text easier to read. I also added a MadWorld 2 disc too. Tell me what you think and critique! :)
Nice job man, this has a lot of potential. Good that you updated it with the template an all. I would have preffered if the character on the front was centred and the back was more white though. Good for a second box. You will improve my man. :)
The front is kind of empty and the back is crowded as the above said.
The font for the tagline doesnt look too good so try to change that and the screen borders are too big.
I think you've made TREMENDOUS improvements from version 1. I agree that the front is a bit empty, but personally, I'd rather see some blood there as opposed to another render.
Ladies and gentlemen, I present MadWorld II, the sequel to the goriest game on Wii :) thank you to those who helped in the WiP thread. Credit to KoopaDasher for the kick ass logo and to Silent Oblivion for the template.
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Template is wrong, wrong, wrong. Change it.
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#2, I agree, that template isn't good. The box is fairly good. I suggest adding some touches of red to the front.
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Please change the template. Overall it's good. Though your back text is very hard to read.
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As the others have said, the template it pretty annoying. And the art... I realize it's a black and white game, but you need SOMETHING. Something to break up all those images. It's painful to look at. Even a bit of red would help. As the others have said, the back text is very difficult to read. Overall, your biggest issue is that you simply have too many image here, making the box far too busy.
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how do they say? less is more?
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Alright I'll edit it more, change the template and change the text on the back. I'll also change the front and have version 2 uploaded when it's done :)
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#6, cha cha cha. Charmin.
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#8, it's true ;)
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Looks awesome.
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UPDATED! View in full!!! I completely re-designed it and went for a much more simplistic look for the front, much like the first MadWorld's official box art. I cleaned up the back also and made the text easier to read. I also added a MadWorld 2 disc too. Tell me what you think and critique! :)
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I liked the front on version 1 better. But, still, great work!
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Good job, the back is a little cluttered, but it works.
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Nice job man, this has a lot of potential. Good that you updated it with the template an all. I would have preffered if the character on the front was centred and the back was more white though. Good for a second box. You will improve my man. :)
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This is nice. Personally, I think that a second render on the front would look good.
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Thank you guys and thank you for the fav's and critique! :)
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The back is good, but the front is very plain. Also, I noticed the quality is a bit low.
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#17 Yeah I ended up deciding to do a basic front similar to the first game's box art. View the printable for the highest quality :)
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The front and back don't flow very well together. The front is very simple, which isn't necessarily bad, but it clashes with the crowded back.
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The front is kind of empty and the back is crowded as the above said.
The font for the tagline doesnt look too good so try to change that and the screen borders are too big.
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#19 I see what you mean now, I'll see what I can do!
#20 Understood! I'll see what I can do to make it look better :)
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I think you've made TREMENDOUS improvements from version 1. I agree that the front is a bit empty, but personally, I'd rather see some blood there as opposed to another render.
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