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Kirby's Dream Land 3 box art cover
By avatar StarMario22 34 on January 18th, 2011
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StarMario22 34 [ 1 decade ago ]

My new Kirby boxart. It's Kirby's Dream Land 3 for the SNES. I really love this game, so I thought of making a boxart for it.
To be honest, It didn't actually turned out as I wanted to have it, but I still like how it is now.

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MattStar 49 [ 1 decade ago ]

I like it, my only problem is the tagline looks odd. But otherwise GJ!

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wasa-bi 7 [ 1 decade ago ]

It's nothing special, but well made. The front looks very official too.

The back however... The Headline seems off, because everything is straight, just the headline got that wave. It would be okay if you made the font similar to the logo on the front, but not with that basic Arial/Futura-type.

The texts flow at the lower image seems a bit off too.

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StarMario22 34 [ 1 decade ago ]

#3, Ok, I see what I can do.

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StarMario22 34 [ 1 decade ago ]

Here you go, this was the best I could do. :)
(sorry for double-post)

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wasa-bi 7 [ 1 decade ago ]

Got better, but you too have to mind the type area at the headline on the back (I showed it here: link so you may get the idea)
and covering the "important" is not very clever ;) It's IMPORTANT, so don't hide it.

The text makeup is a step in the right direction, but there's still room for improvement.

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Prong1978 18 [ 1 decade ago ]

I agree with wasa-bi about the IMPORTANT. Maybe you could shrink that red guy a bit. Also, not that it's necessary, but did you consider making a cartridge?

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StarMario22 34 [ 1 decade ago ]

#7, I will see what I can do. About the cartridge, I'm not that into making one. To be honest I never actually made one.

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The Man From P.O.O.T. 1 [ 1 decade ago ]

The box jutting out of the black edge on the front would normally have another tagline in it. You should probably add one, or if you don't want one, remove that part so it doesn't interfere with the art.

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Markiegee50X 1 [ 1 decade ago ]

#4, good job man

Edited at 1 decade ago

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