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My first box uploaded to the site. Took some advice in the forums and improved my design a bit. IMO, it came out pretty good for a beginner :)
Persona: Collection Box Cover Comments
Comment on Helter_Skelter's Persona: Collection Box Art / Cover.
Not bad for a starter submission. What stands out to me is the inconsistent styles of the front and back. The front lends itself well to the Persona series' quirky, offbeat style, which I think you could have translated to the back as well.
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Well, like Pleiades said your front and back don't mesh well, maybe take a look at the other Persona titles boxart, and observe how they laid everything out. Then try to see if you can incorporate that to your box.
But what really threw me off was the Title, "P3C", it kind of lead me to believe that this was a compilation of Persona 3, P3FES, and P3P. Especially since Theodore is on the cover, and he's exclusive to P3P. There are also a few other inconsistencies that I can point out, like no screens for Persona 2, and not stating which Persona 2 (either Eternal Punishment, Innocent Sin, or both) is incorporated in your collection.
Although, seeing as this is your first box, those could've just been a minor oversights; and just to let you know, I only gripe about all of this because I'm an avid SMT fan.
Also I'd like to congratulate you on joining VGBoxart, and posting your fist box! A Helluvah lot better than mine was, considering mine was just a PS edit! XD
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