It's my first box.
Special thanks to Silent Oblivien.
New Super Mario Bros 3 Box Cover Comments
Comment on eldestrutor's New Super Mario Bros 3 Box Art / Cover.
It's my first box.
Special thanks to Silent Oblivien.
Comment on eldestrutor's New Super Mario Bros 3 Box Art / Cover.
Nice for first, welcome to vgb.
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For a first, I can say that this isn't as bad as my first, which is a good first haha.
I think that in the next covers that you will be creating, you should consider a few things.
I like how you wanted to take the 3D perspective of the box, but the template, which isn't 3D, just makes it look weird. Try updating the box with it just flat out, it would be better.
The front's idea is pretty neat. I would try to make it just a bit less cluttered, e.g. Bowser Jr.
The back can be better.the text could either be placed on an underlying object to make it stand out, or add text effects. Mario is floating as well, try to establish a standing ground for him and Yoshi. Yoshi is also walking off the template, which is a major design turn-off. The ratings are mix matching; there's PEGI on the front and ESRB on the back. You should add the developer logo (Nintendo) there on the bottom right of the front too. Hope you take these things into consideration, and hope to hear more from you.
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