Attempt: omg work.
Hey!
This better had work I swear to god.
Here's my (totally on time, smh vgba uploading) entry for the sequel competition. Thanks to everybody that commented in the WIP thread (even if I did only post once for this version of the cover).
Thanks for looking, good luck to the other entrants.
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Tomb Raider: The Lost City of Kitezh Cover Comments
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i give up.
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Looks like it finally uploaded! Looks awesome...nice work!
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Thanks a lot!
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You rocked
Good luck.
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Thank you! ^^
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Woooo it works, finally.
On the front I think it may have looked better if Lara was bigger and you moved "Kitezh" up a line. Apart form that, great stuff. I love it.
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Thanks Vince! I may give what you suggested a try, and update it if I think it looks better :)
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wow very nice front is very good design
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Thank you ^^
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Good Stuff TR! composition wise this is one of your best works it's structured really nicely the layout of the back is super impressive, i'm quite jealous haha,
I also like the monochrome colour scheme, the normally with these type of boxes everything seems to blur together but the dynamic shades of oranges/browns make everything pop out really nicely,
defiantly one of my favourites from you, Keep it up TR! =)
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Thanks for the kind words Paper :)
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I love it really nice work man
But i think is that you use a font for text that does not perfect with book
I think need to change text font
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What's wrong with the font?
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@TheTombRaider There is no reduction in your font but classic font looks better with book cover
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Loovvve it! Finally working!
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Thanks man! :)
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I quite like the brownish color scheme (it complements the exploration aspect of the tomb raider) the placement of the typography is also spot on (I'd only suggest to create a bit more blank space between the first and second part of text on the back)
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Thanks a lot man! Yeah I considered doing that, since the text boxes look a little cramped.
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Excellent work, Nathan! ;) (the biggest fan of Tomb Raider) aha h ^.^
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Thank you! ^-^
And I think you may be right with that, haha
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I like it but the text as it is not in its place
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I think (as do other commenters) it's structured quite well, and I wouldn't say it's out of place at all.
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@TheTombRaider I'm not so sure. I think the font should be serif throughout and it shouldn't be so close to the edges of the front and back. Also in places the background is almost as bright as the text, so a faint 16% black outer glow on the text wouldn't go amiss. There's also no barcode which would make it kinda difficult to buy the book.
Design and colours look good though.
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@Sarashi
Meh, fair enough. I see where you're coming from.
And I was gonna put a barcode on there but they look really tacky and bring the design down in my opinion so I didn't bother.
Thanks for the feedback ^^
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Beautiful
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Thanks ^^
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THE LOST CITY OF KITTIEZ XD
i remember this omfg
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wow holy shiet
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